When she was young a misunderstanding caused Twilight to create a check list "Find out how to turn into a colt" She never did, and that checked box was never checked. Now she's older, and more powerful, and she's just re-disovered that unchecked box
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Well, perhaps a few paragraphs worth of hemming and hawwing, please? Just to set the reader "on edge" as it were?
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I sort of jump into things, but the discussion that leads to the set up will get a bit of air time.
i have no objections to any of the questions u ask, all of it would in ways enhance the story...
Well, you could include one moderate or several short snippets of the discussions leading up to Dusk agreeing to help AJ. That way, you could include the most productive and useful core pieces involved without having an entire chapter or two devoted to the process of showing things coming about to the desired result. Really, considering this story is intentionally high on clop, it might be better to trim down the necessary dark parts and non-comedic drama points into short bits and flashbacks. You'll have those aspects involved, but they can take up less space more easily.
And in context of the story, the AJ/Mac moments are all but expected, so I don't feel they'd be out of place in the slightest. Potentially even having Mac filling in for Dusk when he has to go back to being Twilight for a time, so she can attend getting things set up for more regular switching back and forth. Even if she were to reach a point of staying Dusk Shine long term or permanently, Twilight still has a lot of life to attend. Besides, as it is a potion process, Twilight could arrange production of several doses of both the stallion-izer and counterpotion in advance so all she needs is to plan which days are which and just needs to down the appropriate dose. Part of me can see easily Twilight getting addicted to sex as a male, as well as sex as a female, so her planning to enjoy both seems sensible enough.
Oh really?
There it is.
Subtle.
She's not a pony.
Yes, if you ever DO do that, whatever you do, stay calm, and try to be rational.
You don't need the period between grown and or, or, you need to capitalize the O in Or.
And now you DO need a period. Can't believe I missed that.
Here's hoping she takes it well.
Oh yeah. My headcanon is she's perfectly sane, she just likes acting senile because it amuses her.
She has a point. She's also taking this remarkably well. Then again, I do like the headcanon that she's a Cool Old Mare.
HEH!
Whoa.
Of course you can.
I freaking love Grann y Smith.
Gotta be maddening.
She's right you know.
She mad.
Eager as hell?
Not in the way you'd expect.
Most dependable of ponies indeed.
Fucking? Yes.
BicepS, thought I fixed that.
Oh my...
You double spaced between to and feel.
Nope.
What the f*ck Rarity?!
Clever mare.
Please do.
Probably.
Never piss off an alicorn. ESPECIALLY one that's very protective of his friends and is in touch with a nearly all powerful reality warper with a sick sense of humor.
Not as easy as you think, if females go without sex for a long time, or relief anyway, they can go nuts, but they won't die, males however...
Good.
Guess so, you're going to need to play the long game.
Well...
True. That reminds me though, why DID you have that ridiculously frou frou dress? A joke from Celestia?
I was expecting something more, but, I'll take what I can get. And besides, he's bucking Dusk Shine, or if you prefer, bucking Twilight Sparkle, this is obviously set after the Season 3 finale, and I THINK after Season 4, she LIVES to defy the possible.
*sigh* Keep it in your pants, Big Mac.
Huh. Point taken.
Likely.
Huh?
Ah.
Oh my.
Most likely.
I think he does.
DUN DUN DUUUN!
Probably for the best as we can easily imagine the argument, and unlike say, Star Wars, while we know the end result, there's no way to spin it into making it fun.
6789075 I've actually got about eighty percent of the next chapter done. What I decided to go with was the Role Play, and then I arranged a plot device that helped explain how things had led up to that point. Mostly because if I had done it the other way I would have given away an important plot point that would have lessened the impact on the reader of what was happening. or so my thinking went.
I'm still wrestling with just what to do with Twilight's ability to switch genders. I don't want her to switch her orientation in regards to liking being in control. Don't want to go with males are naturally doms and Females are natural subs. Rarity for instance can quite enjoy either role, but Pinkie Pie would much rather play the frightened victim and get to scream her lungs out.
I'm thinking I might play with the idea that Twilight is actually afraid of having relations with a stallion. She knows it's not true, but deep in her subconscious is that all such relationships revolve around stallion's spanking mares. And she's been against that since she was six. It's what started the whole, turn into a colt, thing.
So I'm thinking she might have a rather vanilla encounter with Big Mac, who's comfortable enough in his sexuality to allow her to take the lead. Not talking Dom/sub here, just Twilight checking him out, and working up her nerve for the big step. I can see Twilight going into full nerd mode as she checks out Mac's equipment and compares it to the operational manual, how to sex book, she brings along.
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Yay!
Oh, I am so reading that Chapter!
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Why not make it a mild D/S scene? If Big Mac notices how uncomfortable Twilight is, he could tell her to slap a pair of cuffs on his wrists so she feels safer. You know, as a sign of mutual trust. Or if that's no good, MacIntosh could suggest being blindfolded before lying down and letting Twilight examine him up close. That's a big sign of trust without too overt a D/S theme.
6791755 I was leaning toward him pretty much relaxing in whatever location it is, while Twilight tentatively explores his body, ramping up till she mounts him cowgirl style. But my writing style is fluid, no telling what might inspire me when I eventually get to that scene.
AJ and big mac just need to fuck already.
When i read this i Imagine AJ saying it with a frasier crane style exasperation