When she was young a misunderstanding caused Twilight to create a check list "Find out how to turn into a colt" She never did, and that checked box was never checked. Now she's older, and more powerful, and she's just re-disovered that unchecked box
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I think a part of the AJ/BM thought has to consider the overall feel going on. My filters are broken, so as far as I'm concerned, it's going to fit right in with what you're doing so far and what you've indicated you're heading towards.
Overall to this point, it's a pretty decent clop-focused story that doesn't sacrifice actual story. There's a certain amount of impatience that we haven't gotten to the point of 'and then they all fucked' expectations, but at the same time you're giving time to world building and buildup. For what it is, it's a good effort.
First off, on the whole Applejack and Big Mac I personally don't care if you go one way or the other. Do what you feel will make the best story if you fell that Applejack and Big Mac doing the whole incest thing is the best way to go, then go for it. And I agree with 6496905 the way thing's are going I can totally see Applejack giving in and doing it at least once.
Personally I'm a Spike fan myself and don't recall seeing him yet. While he may be to young in cannon I'm hoping you find a way to include him as one of the dominate males going to Caridoon with his own slaves.
This was pretty good, but the whole time I was wondering. How does this relate to Dush? And then, there is was in the last paragraph. This is going to be interesting.
Applejack and Big Mac incest, No. Maybe it's just me but i don't like it because it is cliche.
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I actually have the next Dusk and Pinkie chapter written, but I have to do up the introductory chapters for the rest of the main six. Hopefully I won't take too long in getting them out.
Only Fluttershy and Rarity left, and anyone who's seen the Epilogue of Applejacked will have seen at least part of what Fluttershy is up to. If you don't want to read that I'm going to include the pertinent bit in her chapter.
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I'm seeing this as a long term project, and at the time Spike, and the CMC turn eighteen sex-slavery is a thing in Ponyville. Consensual mind you. So anyone who wanted to do up a story about Spike dealing with the reality of life in Ponyville after it has been contaminated by Caridoon magic via the gate is welcome to PM me.
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Tell me about it. My mind is stuffed with possible scenarios, but when I started this out it was with the intention of creating a solid foundation for creating a kinky universe where casual sex and consensual sex-slavery was a thing instead of just jumping in and tossing off a short explanation as to how it all happened.
Does not mean other authors could not write stories taking place down the road past the time line I'm working on.
6497173 There is that. There is a certain attraction to them having unresolved sexual tension.
But everytime I tell myself I'm not going full applecest, someone posts a fantastic bit of artwork featuring them and I waver.
6497192 I can see were you're coming form. I kind of feel the same about Twilight and Shinning.
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anyone who has read Applejacked knows that the rules of that land mean Big Mac can't make Applejack his personal slave. Not because he's her brother, but because he's an earth pony, and the whole system is designed to prevent un-wanted births by matching females with males belonging to other species. In caridoon this includes Pegasus and Unicorns in Applejacks case as the magic of that land makes those pairing infertile.
But, as Applejack's brother, Big Mac does have the legal right, in Caridoon, to choose the male who will own his sister. Or to sell her for that matter.
6497234 From what I have gathered from Ch7 of this story. I WOOD HATE APPALEJACKED! I do not like story's like that.
Wow...
Yeah, I think I can see how that would end.
Riiight.
Err... OK then, not sure I wanted to know that.
Yes, quite.
HeroEs. Also, Rainbow, you realize it may not be this simple, right?
Heh.
Eh?
Ah, that explains the thing before the chapter.
Literally and figuratively, I take it.
That is an amusing mental image. You get a cookie.
For once?
Yeah, I think I can see where this is going for Dashie and Dusk.
And here we go...
What cleverness, you dug yourself into a hole.
What the?
Not gonna lie, I had the most demonic grin on my face when I read this giggling evilly.
Yeah, I'd say it'd be a bit too much. Besides, whatever's in her system or not, he's still her brother.
6497188 Technically, it's a thing on Earth right now, if you think about it. Most people that engage in such just don't talk about it, like it's shameful or something.
I also like how you've pretty much set it up so Gilda becomes a pony convert. Likely because of Dusk Shine.
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Which is why I try to give out enough information that you don't have to read it to get this story.
but it is set in the same universe as this story. Just that for purposes of setting things up it was necessary for it to be darker than my preference. On the plus side the damsel was rescued, and while Celestia's magic and part of her personality is captive, she is not suffering, and is in fact making her captors miserable
6498862 And I thank you for that.
While I loved the chapter, 'specially the baseball bit, was kinda hoping some kind of kinky Dusk on Gilda action.
However, Dash blurting out she has a 'coltfriend', possibilities with a Dusk/Rainbow/Gilda threesome. Especially with Twilight/Dusk's ever growing BDSM kink.
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Once I established Twilight accepting her Dusk Shine Persona I needed to show the rest of the Main Six and establish a foundation for them to join in the fun.
I still have to showcase Rarity and Fluttershy before I get back to Dusk and Pinkie. Don't worry. This story is open ended and eventually Dusk will have Gilda bent over a suitable object, her ass red and full of stallion spunk.
In a way pretty much everything I've written, and the three chapters to follow this, are just a prelude to the start of the real story.
What about your Fluttercord thing? I may not like it, but I'd like it less if one ditches the other or something. And I say "YES!!!!!!!!!!" to incest, as long as Dusk is there, too. Make it a threesome, with AJ as the link.
Didn't realize the Rainbow of this story was such a sexist...