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Tuxedo Thunder


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not a bad story, it's got a good reason for what happens, all in all a good luna story, which is harder than you think to come by.

Comment posted by Lighting Ace deleted Jul 5th, 2015
Comment posted by Tuxedo Thunder deleted Jul 4th, 2015

Wonderful. This is very sweet and extremely sexy. I love the way you build up their relationship so that the second half feels natural and earned. I'll absolutely be reading this again.

a good story my friend :pinkiehappy:

That Washington amazing the way they met the way they make love and the way they love each other :heart:

Causing her to moan out and sigh contently. Indulging herself in the pleasure my hands

There should be a comma between these two sentences. There are a few other spots in the story where periods are used in lieu of commas, but other than that, excellent writing.

Loved the fanfic/clopfic :twilightblush:

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