After a semi-productive day of job hunting and FIM watching, our protagonist takes a nap on their couch. They find themselves in a wonderful dream in the land of Equestira, and it all seems so real! Except, your not supposed to feel pain in dreams...
Umbral's folloy was simple, he spent so much time planning revenge against Celestia he got tunnel vision and went for the wrong goal. he never saw the changes in Equestria. He never saw Celestia's plans for reclaiming Luna, he assumed she had given up on their sister, given up on harmony and family, when she had infarct learned more about it. His goal should have been to get Luna back, to free her from Nightmare Moon, but he let his anger blind him.
Umbral's folloy was simple, he spent so much time planning revenge against Celestia he got tunnel vision and went for the wrong goal. he never saw the changes in Equestria. He never saw Celestia's plans for reclaiming Luna, he assumed she had given up on their sister, given up on harmony and family, when she had infarct learned more about it. His goal should have been to get Luna back, to free her from Nightmare Moon, but he let his anger blind him.
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