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TimedRaven117


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Read it over at Fanfiction, that is why you get a like but you do have permission to post it here right?

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Of course, I'm the writer of it after all.

I love the world building in this. The timeline made me wonder about the possible ways things will go in the near future, especially with the contact that will happen between the Earth forces and the Counsel. I do have to say that I would like to see a bit more on how the Equestirans are fitting in with everything going on. I can't remember any crew members on the ships that where from there, save for Twilight.

Also, random thought, how are non-pony species handling what is going on? Are there Diamond Dog's on the colonies? Are griffons being utilized in the military? How are Minotaurs relating with Mutons and Humans? Just random thoughts, is all. Nothing that needs to be answered.

Continue the writing. Can't wait for the next chapter.

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Unfortunately due to design, and story decisions I've decided to restart this story. No worries, i have the true timeline all planned out and just waiting for my Beta to go over everything so we can hammer out the minor details.

In the mean time I'm releasing all the chapters I've completed now on FIMfiction. And maybe a little extra side chapter I've been working on.

Interesting story so far, good work.

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