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When survive from the fire, Flash Sentry brought SpringTrap from the auction, but when Sunset Shimmer learns the animatronic causes the hallucinations, they asked Princess Twilight to store him in the basement in a strong crate, but even in a strong crate isn't strong enough to hold him back, now Twilight and her friends must keep the eye on the two windows, and the giant doors within the map room to keep him out of there, with things to survive are supplies, a fan, lanter, flashlight, the same old cameras, and phone calls from Flash and Sunset themselves.

Story cancelled, please read the link: http://www.fimfiction.net/blog/646921/my-fnaf-story-cancel-for-a-reason

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Comments ( 5 )

No comedy tag? That's too bad.

Is English your second language or are you very young? I couldn't finish reading this because your punctuation was incorrect, your verb tenses were wrong... there's a lot you need to work on. Also, the story idea is hardly original.

I'm sorry. I don't want to discourage you, but you need to work on your fundamentals. :applejackunsure:

Here are some free resources:


Good luck!

6312482 I'll be honest with you, I'm just doing this on my phone, but now I'm at home, and going to redo my chapter, thanks for the link by the way.

6315855 Ah. OK, you're welcome.

what gonna happen next?

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