Ok, I admit, I'm not great at sneaking. I barely got passed Applejack and Rarity who were talking about a spa, and I ran into a few ponies who looked around when they were bumped. And right now I'm doing better because of the lack of equines.
Right now I'm crouching by some houses when I saw a pony I didn't think I'd get to see, The Doctor, the amount of fangirling I'm doing inside my head is huge! But what actually scared me, was that he was looking directly at me and smirking. And then he started walking over to my position, I froze and didn't dare move.
He walks up right next to me and looks around, after a second of me still being frozen and him looking around, he looks back at me... Then he just pokes me, no seriously, he just poked my shoulder and I nearly lost my balance from my crouching position. He snickers then gets a serious face.
"You know, you're terrible at stealth correct?" He states, to which I remain silent, still not moving, but I could barely hold back a sqee at his voice, it was David Tennets.
He sighs, then gets out a sonic screwdriver, and to which I start to really sweat. If he uses that my cover will be blown, and I Really don't feel like running. He points it at me and to which I smack it out of his hoof, as it hits the ground he looks back at me and scowls.
"That wasn't very nice you know!"
I remain quiet as he continues to scowl at me, he reachs down it get his sonic screwdriver, and I smack his head. I'm reeeaaally going to regret doing that. His head hits the ground and he picks himslf up and starts to look really pissed.
"You shouldn't have done that." As he said that, he brings up the sonic screwdriver and turns it on.
It immediately takes affect on my armor, and my invisibility turns off. I look at my hands, then back at him. He's smirking at me, looking triumphant, that's when I stand up and tower over him, he notices this and instantly starts to make himself smaller. You gotta remember, in the face of a predator, most animals, when out of options, tend to cower. Even if they are Timelords, that's when something hits my helmet and lands on the ground. I look over to see a muffin on the ground, I look up to Derpy staring at me, with what I assume to be a, 'If you hurt him, I'll tear off your head, and shove it up your ass face. I stand there for a second longer, looking directly back at her, I slowly crouch down and pick up the muffin, I raise it up or her to see it fully... I then shove it in the Doctors face. Oh, she. Was. Pissed! She started to fly at me with speed that could have matched Rainbows, time seems to slow down as she flys at me, her hooves ready to strike. I then move without my brain saying so, and I do the matrix, I bend my back and avoid her completely and she flys into the wall behind me. I get back up to look over at her, she's unconscious obviously, but I couldn't help but feel bad.
That's when the purple bolt of a spell hit me, I fly backwards and hit the spot were Derpy was at, and I notice she's now gone. I slide to the ground, my shield was offline, and Serenity was saying something I couldn't hear. My ears were ringing, and it was hard to concentrate, I look up to see Twilight staring daggers at me, she had her wings extended, and I think she was trying to make herself look bigger... Which I don't think it was working on me to much. I look to her side to see Rainbow with Derpy and the Doctor, the Doctor was holding Derpy in his hooves, trying to wake her up, and Rainbow was giving me the death glare.
I knew when to run, and when to fight... This situation called for a retreat, I got myself to one of my knees, and I look at Twilight. I hope this would work. I pull out a frag gerenad , Serenity had made me a few on are walk here, I press the button, and toss it in front of me, she looks at it confused for a second until her eyes widen, she puts up her shield as the gerenad detonated, as you can all guess, I bolted as soon as it went off... Or rather, I stumbled until I regained my concentration and ran.
I ran for awhile until I had to stop, I stood panting until I looked up. I was outside of Sugercube Corner, and I could here Pinkie singing.
"Are you alright?"
"Yeah Serenity, I'm fine." I look around and notice nobody around, weird, but that's good at least.
"My scans are showing two broken ribs... Your lucky your not dead from all that running."
I couldn't help but chuckle at that, I've never broken a bone in my life, yet here I am with now two broken ribs, Life sucks.
"Well, at least we got away." I continue to catch my breath that now hurts to breathe in, until I noticed two pink hooves in front of me. I look up again to see a smiling Pinkie staring at me, look, I've seen My Little Pony, and every time she did that... It never surprised me.
"Hi! Are you here because of the new brownie recipe I made?" She's looking at me with a smile that looks like it hurts. I only stare at her, then I stand up all the way again to look at her.
"No, I'm trying to get through this godforsaken town without dying." I state, I then try to walk past her but she appears in front of me again.
"Why? What's the matter with Ponyville? It's the nicest town in Equestria." She's looking at me with wide eyes that are full of curiosity.
"Well, right now, it ain't that nice."
"Why?"
"Because I was shot into a wall by a Alicorn?"
"Oooo! An Alicorn!?IknowanalicornhernamesTwilightandsheusedtobeponyvilleslibrarianandthenthenthelibrarywasdestroyedbyTirekandhewasabigmeanieandtookallmagicfromeveryponyandthenTwilightfoughthimandhetookherpowersandthenweallgainedpowersofFriendshipandwetransformedanddefeatedTirek!" She takes in a long lungful of air before breathing out again, she then smiles at me.
If you all could see my face... It was complete shock at how she did that, I swear she doesn't need air, and only does it for show.
"Um... Yeah, she attacked me." Oh I just fucked up.
"Why'd she attack you? She wouldn't have attacked you unless you did something she didn't like, and everypony knows not to make her upset."
"Well, you see-" I didn't get to finish my sentence until she gasped and glared daggers at me.
"Now I remember! You were the one Celestia told Twilight to watch out for because he's dangerous!"
I did the only thing I could think of... "Ok you got- OH MY GOD! WHAT THE HELL IS THAT!" I point behind her and she instantly turns around, to only see nothing, she turns back only to see me running away.
"HEY! THATS NOT NICE!" She yells, but I didn't give two flying fucks, and I kept running, I ran until I had run out of the town, and I didn't stop until I was a good distance away, I stopped and started panting again.
"Your going to get yourself killed you know." Serenity states, and to which I don't respond to.
I stand up straight again, and continue on. I take out the map and look at it, by the looks of things, I was going the right way. But I should be careful, I don't want to get caught. I look around to see just plain grassy fields, man, this reminds me of home. I really wish I hadn't come here, to this world, it fucking sucks... But I have to admit, this place is nice, I mean, everything seems fresh, and clean, and colorful. Well, maybe this world won't actually be that bad.
-1 hour later-
So I found the town, it's a quaint little town. Most it's inhabitants are ponys, but, I did see a few griffins, a Minotaur, and a Zebra. Then I saw a bat pony, she was walking through the street heading into a forest that was nearby. If you're thinking, 'hey, what's the name of the town?' How should I know? I can't fucking read the gibberish they have as letters. I watched her as she walked by some stalls selling fruits and vegetables, and then, I started to follow her, I only saw one bat pony after about thirty minutes of watching the town. So it must be her, so I have to keep an eye on her, but I guess she got the feeling of being watched, she turned around and looked at the bushs I was in, she stared at my location before looking away and shrugging, she continued on, and I stayed a good distance behind her.
We traveled for about, twenty minutes until we ended up in the middle of a clearing in the forest, she looks both ways, then uncovers some grass to reveal a hatch, I watch intently as she opens it up and goes inside, after about five minutes, I follow in after her. The place was dark and I couldn't see anything, I was walking down stairs for a minute before I hit metal flooring.
"I'm going to turn on night vision" Serenity states, and after a few seconds, everything becomes a light green haze and I can see around me, I look left, then right, to see two hallways. I think for a second before I go down the left one, I walk down the hallway until I see a door on the side, I go over to it and see that it has a keypad like from the one you see in the first Halo game, and the door looks like the ones from it too. I go over to it and reach down to press the keypad.
"Stop!" My hand hovers over the keypad as Serenity yelled that. After a second, the keypad glows green and the door opens. "I hacked it, next time, wait for me to tell you to touch things." I roll my eyes and continue into the room, I could tell there was a lot of stuff in here, I look around and see a light switch, I walk over to it and try my luck, I flick it to 'on' and the lights in the room blink for a second before Turning on. Oh. My. God! The room was filled with weapons on racks, there were Assault Rifles, DMR's, Battle Rifles, Magnums, SMG's, Sniper Rifles, Spears, Swords, Gerenads, Axes, Fucking Flamethrowers and Machine Guns! Rocket Launchers, and Gerenad launchers. Oh baby,I died and went to heaven! I run over to the racks and look at them all, they look so beautiful! I go over to a Sniper Rifle and pick it up, and I look at it. Oh my god I think I'm gonna cry, I start to cradle it like a baby.
"Ahem" I freeze, "You know, you look really pathetic right now." I roll my eyes at Serenity and Continue to cradle the Rifle, my Rifle, yes, it's mine now! No one else's! All mine! All of them are mine!
So I do the one thing everyone loves doing... I suit up, I take off the cloak and roll it up, I then proceed to take any weapon I think is worth carrying, which is. Another Magnum, a Gerenad Launcher, An Assault Rifle, that beautiful Sniper Rifle, Two SMG's, a Sword that looks like a katana, and a few more Gerenads. I'm about to leave when I see a necklace on a table, it was obviously a work table with all the guns scattered on it, but the necklace looks out of place. I walk over to it and pick it up, it's a necklace with a black and White Scythe on it, weird... But fucking cool looking! I take off my helmet and put it around my neck, I hear a voice as I put it on and I nearly shit myself.
“I’m Lee Connors, or if you’d like, Venom. If you need a mostly-friendly superhero to help you save the day, then I’m here. I’ll help when you need me.” I look around and realize that it's from the necklace.
I seriously think that's fucking cool, and I made a note to keep in mind that if I need help, somebody's got my back I'm about to put my helmet back on when I think of something, I go over to a roll of tape and take a piece off, I then look around until I found a pen, I write my name and put it on the back of me helmet.
"So that's your name... I like it." I smile at Serenity, then I place the helmet back on pandora walk out of the room. And I know now, that Equestria's gonna know about me after this... And my name is gonna go down in history books... My names Kent, and I'm gonna make sure Gravemind stays where he is.
he should leave Equestria I go to another country, he has an artificial intelligence and these are all the knowledge of mankind
he might use to gather allies and protect themselves from celestia
Love the story bro and I can't wait for more chapters, keep up the good work
Now Celestia is a bigger bitch by getting the Elements to be hostile to him. To be honest though, that was a dumb move attacking the Doctor.
6011392 Slight problem with that. What country is going to upset a cosmic celestial being who moves a star for a hobby? Better yet, who would upset her, and her sister who moves the moon and aligns the stars (as far as has been mentioned in the show) while running the day to day business of a nation with so much casual material wealth that you can toss a pick axe around and hit amethysts, rubies, emeralds, and other assorted gems with out even trying to get rich, and that's not mentioning the stability of a solid gold coinage using economy, the weather control, the magic, or the rate and scale of food production? The only human country that really compares is Rome after cementing trade on the Silk Road, and they overstretched themselves economically and militarily which led to their collapse in less than four hundred years. Equestria has been going strong for at least a thousand years. Let that sink in.
YAY
6012703
1) your solar system is not the same, the sun and moon orbiting the world, and that was shown at an observatory on the same show.
2) they can only move the sun and the moon because it is an attribute of alicorn magic is not brute force that is mentioned in the diary of the sisters
3) try to move a star moon and almost ran out of magic, this is also mentioned in the diary. I repeat, your unirverso is not the same stars are probably not soles
4) we know nothing of the real economy of the world to believe that other nations rely on Equestria jewelry at that level, but the jewels speak very common, dragons feed on it and looks that are hundreds and almost there is no dragons in Equestria, that one could explain why other regions also have such abundant deposits of jewels
5) they have no fine control of day and night, it can not be used as a method of dissuasion
6) this is just my idea but, but Equestria has a history fairly problematic
their land destroyed in conflicts xefobicose
Tirek, discord, sombranmm from afar looks that are problematic or attract trouble
nmm return, this would leave only miss the a tightrope to diplomatic level
the princesses who tried to destroy the world returns to his duties as if nothing
after that Equestria have to play nice not to be rejected from the rest of the world
6012917 I read a lot of stories with him in it, I never understood why, but, I couldn't think of anything better to do.
6012888 The threat of dropping a star on a country is still relevant, plus Nightmare Moon almost succeeded at eternal night, then Celestia locked her in the moon, with the aid of the elements of harmony, which are now weilded by six ponies who re sealed, then reformed Discord, helped to reduce Sombra to a nub of horn, and got rid of Nightmare Moon while leaving behind Luna. Politics is a game of who seems most scary and lies about your actual strength. It is quite easy to terrify some one by simply not mentioning what you can and cannot do, especially if you have that sort of pre-empting reputation. How good at that do you think Celestia is after a millennia when humans get good at it in a mere twenty to thirty years?
6012958 have a valid point, celestia could lie in what you can do or not,
though there another point He Could flee and leave Equestria, without the knowledge of its location there is not much she could do nothing against the
in short if it remains in hiding will be safe
another point also depends on knowledge of the other races on the magic and its environment and any previous conflict
although this depends on the author and his vision of how it works this escuestria
6013080 Okay, fair enough. So what will he eat, where will he drink, and so on. Though we do agree on the author being God of gods (if relevant, and even if not) as far as this story goes. Also, rules of the multiverse. Everything that could happen, has and will happen, up to and including the destruction of the universe.
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The both of you forget, what does he have to stop before he can do anything else?
6013097 good to have the body of a spartan, his theoretical knowledge (these guys are masters the art of sabotage, kidnapping, survival etc.) and a real artificial intelligence these are equipped with a huge theoretical knowledge in all areas
and this world seems to be the type large countries with uninhabited areas, even when chargeling were cast, border areas were desabitadas.el could be pretty good, without considering that the armor have a cell fusion that lasts 50 years
Besides, if he achieves to contact any government, in a way, undetected could reach any beneficial agreement
6013111
We are only discussing possible scenarios in a friendly way. nothing else, we know that you have the last word in history.
6013268 I know, I do like to see these kinds of conversations I get to see and learn things I never actually knew, like things from Equestria society.
6013307
perhaps this interests you, they are discussing the lack of knowledge of the situation in other countries or if an error Writers
http://www.fimfiction.net/blog/488869/equestria-nation-of-the-oblivious
6013111 Well of course he is either going to kill some poor mare, or drag her to God knows where. Or he could just sit on her. Then again, half a ton of Spartan can't be good for any things back.
6013345 Another good example would be Diaries of a Madman by whatmustido, at least if you want a story set on Earth plus (insert number of millions of years here) for Equestria, and a more indepth look at other countries in the same world.
6012703 Rome still beats Equestria, no matter that there's talking ponies, Rome had Gods.
6014333 ... Gods they copied practically, and just renamed from the Greeks. The source material for manticores, hydras, pegasi, alicorns, and Tartarus is Greek mythology. Also, Celestia is pretty much Apollo, while Luna is Athena or Artemis (I forget which one supposedly had dominion of the moon). Add on that the Romans pretty much copied religion from the recently deceased "alliance" of city states called Greek culture.
6014376 Artemis was the huntress I believe, and Athena was the goddess of wisedom and tactics, Athena was renamed and lost her affiliation with tactics.
6014445 Huh, I could of sworn Athena was in charge of the moon as well, what with most images of her having something to do with the moon, usually observing it. Or was it a daughter of Athena... Gah, curse my long term memory gaps!
6014471 If I had to guess, I would say that astronomy and wisedom were pretty close back then, after all, who is so wise as to read the stars themselves.
6014987 Um... Excuse me? Sorry if I don't understand what you said.
6014271 He ain't gonna kill her, I'm not that morbid, I don't kill innocents off the bat. She was gonna be a character at the point of... Some point... Besides... I got a Big Guardian Sentinel about to come in, and that's were the crossovers gonna happen... But, I can't wait to start writing, but it'll take time, so you must all wait and see.
No, no no no no, The Doctor would have kicked the main character's Spartan ass... and if not him then the Elements would have... because we're talking magic and I'm certain Twilight would have roasted him upon meeting him... or used some other kind of spell that I'm not going to care to even try listing...
6025830 You forget about shields AND! The fact that the Doctors not really ever met a Spartan before... And he's technically smaller in his current size. And the character didn't get away unscathed.
6025973 "Yeah, I just got a few broken ribs! I'll just walk it off!"
And sure you have shields, but did you forget that they run out?
6025991 They did when Twilight shot him, also, those broken ribs are gonna come back and hurt like hell.
6026037 Shouldn't they be hurting like hell right now?
6026052 Serenity numbed the pain, and he just shrugged it off... For now... But don't worry, next chapters gonna have him being shot at with a giant laser.
6026107 Oooh, please notify me when it comes out!
6026120 Will Do!
6011772 That was less of an attack and more knocking shit out of his grip and slapping his head.
Should have had him take the sonic screwdriver from the doctor for "safe keeping" just in case so you can have a angry doctor chasing him throughout equstria
6072634 Nah... The Doctor would just get it back... Pretty easily.
6091573 Thank you! Glad you enjoy it
6096046 Spartan II's can do that, but I'm not completely sure about Spartan IIII's
I want you to know.....I NEED MOAR! D;
Grerenads....
You f**ked up m8
6108581 Trying mate! Kinda busy in my end!
6109022 Yes, I know, I screwed up, please don't hate me!
6112007 take your time :3 I want good stories not short stories
6109022 yus fire grerenads
Love the story so far i hope he can be friends with the main 6 soon hope to see the next chapter soon
6158418 Me and a friend thought that they were more in the middle of Spartan two's and threes, they have a better amount of strength, but we're made more in quantity then quality.
Ima firin ma gerenads!!!
I can haz assult rifle now? (Damn cat memes)
Kinda liking this story so far, keep it up
he can us armor abilities, so he needs to equip a jetpack and turn the dial to infinite usage.
basically jetpack joyride.
Honestly, if the ponies are anti-human, then as a Spartan it is his duty to reduce them to a state that they pose no threat to humanity. Continuing with honesty, the Master Chief would probably have decided to treat them like less advanced Covenant, given their apparent attitude towards humans.
6600715 aaaaayyyyyup! DONT CARE !!!! TO MUCH COOL GAMING SHIT GOING ON TO NOTICE!!!
I stopped reading when I found out he was searching for vemon