When a clash of cultures accidentally leads to Scootaloo getting in a fight with her shy new classmate, it's up her big sis Rainbow Dash (and a garishly-dressed Twilight) to help her realize the importance of getting along with griffons.
Rainbow Dash has a dilemma. She can either admit that the doll belongs to her, which it totally doesn't or she could murder Rarity. The second option is looking pretty
Scootaloo got the two things she wanted most of all; she got a family and she could fly. There's just two problems; She already had a family, and there are lingering doubts about her ability to fly.
Flight and life lessons mix for Rainbow Dash, Spike, Scootaloo, and all of their friends as everpony reaches for the sky, supporting each other's dreams and hopes no matter where they may lead them.
Although there are a few places where I felt a proper transition between characters' perspectives was missed, this was very well written! I'd like to know what the CMC were talking about, and how Rainbow deals with what's going on in the future, but I'm the kind of writer that likes to leave open ends, so it's not as big a deal for me as it might be for others. The characters are very close to how they're depicted in the show as well, which is something I like about fanfictions and adaptations. 9/10
not bad, really. but if feels incomplete to me.
Why the hell are you capitalising every single word!? It makes it painful to read.
You need to change the title before I'll read this.
Scootaloo's dreams come true or Scootaloo's dream comes true.
If your title and description have errors, it makes me not want to read the story.
Although there are a few places where I felt a proper transition between characters' perspectives was missed, this was very well written! I'd like to know what the CMC were talking about, and how Rainbow deals with what's going on in the future, but I'm the kind of writer that likes to leave open ends, so it's not as big a deal for me as it might be for others. The characters are very close to how they're depicted in the show as well, which is something I like about fanfictions and adaptations. 9/10