Applejack received a latter from her dear uncle, Linus, asking her to meet him at the lonesome canyon at Red Rock, a desolated country far south of Equestria...
Linus left the farm when she was still just a filly, abandoning the family and leaving a void of emptiness that only time was able to scar. Applejack holds a deep respect towards Linus and everything he did for her when her parents died, so it's natural she wonders why Linus left the farm and the family; but why call her now after all these years?. What awaits in Red Rock?
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Chapters (4)
Ok, I didn't get through the whole chapter yet, but I really like the story idea and it's well written. However, you make some spelling mistakes that could have been easily corrected with spellcheck. Make sure you use that tool, and I'd consider getting an editor, just to go over the finer details and make your story more polished. It's very good so far though, and your summary is great. Surprised that you don't have any views or likes yet. It's a fairly original idea that's made good use of the show's cannon. I'm on summer break, so I could help you edit.
I was an English major, an editor on my high school's nationally ranked newspaper, and have a few fanfiction stories under my belt. No MLP ones though; I can't seem to find the urge or inspiration to write one, though I love reading them. Anyway, I'm just putting that option out there for you, and I promise you I'm not bs-ing the accomplishments I've listed. Good job brony! I'm tracking this and look forward to reading more.
I'm intrigued, to say the least.
I will say that there is a lot of comma splices, you're overly semi-colon happy, and it would help to separate dialogue from explanation and descriptions.
Under the surface you got something great in the works, I can tell. Consider yourself watched.
Sweet. Spelling errors are plentiful, but I could really care less. I like where this is going.
Very well written and I'm looking forward to the next chapter.