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Bluetree650


I have been writing for a while, and still have a lot to learn, but hopefully you can follow me in the journey.

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Two hundred years ago, Equestria was under the grips of a great plague, one that, in the end, will claim five sixths of the entire pony species.
Celestia tried everything to save her children. She purified entire lakes, turned infertile ground fertile, but when it comes to medical magic, all she can do is mend bones.
After losing a close family member, she turns to the dreaded dark magic found in Tarmogoyf and enchants a new born named Pac Agate.
Four years later, Pac saved the pony race from extinction, but there were consequences for her. Ones that trail through her linage and cripple her children.
Now, with Crystal Agate, the last child in the Agate linage must learn who she is and why she was placed on this planet.

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After reading this story i personal wish Celestia will get whats coming to her for brainwashing, forced possession and multiple counts of murder,along with all the other charges that can be laid on her.

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What I love about my story is that you really can't blame a single pony. Yes, Celestia did all that, but what other option did she have? In the Black Plague, she tried everything she could, yet nothing worked. Tarmogoyf was only brought out becouse that was the only thing could do, besides watch her family die.
She wanted to end the curse earlier, but couldn't take knowing she was murdering innocent fillies by not giving them her kiss.
She had no choice but to kill Crystal. She had, in fact, killed twenty or more nobles. She would be executed either way.
I can't say that she'll get her comeuppances, but she does have to deal with the knowledge that she was the cause of all this, and she was the pony that murdered a six year old. That along with the stress of being a princess will be on her head for the rest of her eternal life.

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