I can definitely see that you refined what you had before. I though it was good the first time, just needed a little polish, and now it does. Looking forward to chapter 2.
8001587 Well, that's not how it seems to be going so far; she's been gawking over Rarity FAR FAR MORE then Spike (like the fact that she NEVER EVEN HINTED ABOUT HIM in the shower) , which is what I'm complaining about
8001497 Yes, but Ember's are tusk-like whereas Ram horns curl up like Princess Leia's hair buns
8001723 Oh don't worry, Spike's a part of this too. If you'll recall, Ember did like Spike's appearance, but her dick wanted Rarity, hence the shower scene.
8001748 yeah, and after those 5 paragraphs, you practically never even mention her attraction to him again... unless you include the description "his strong hands" at the very end of the chapter...
and for the record, I'm only complaining because, again, I was expecting a Spike&Ember&NoOneElse fic (especially one where she's a futa) , but also because I'm not a fan of les clop
8001759 I understand. To each his own. All I ask is that you wait for the next chapter. But despite your complaints with this, I do hope you enjoyed the rest of it.
8002803 Not a lot of people are, which is why I stayed away from writing it, but it was brought up that there was absolutely no futa Ember fics so I figured 'why not be the first?'
Guys. You're not into futa, that's fine. You don't need to leave a comment about it like it's a problem the author has to fix. It won't change the story that you don't like intersexed characters. Either read and judge the story based on the writing, or don't vote and leave to go read another story. If we're reading erotica I assume we're most of us adults, let's act like it?
There's a part about the concept of this story that I am vehemently against but I'm still going to read it to completion because I choose to. If I found that I couldn't, I'd just go read another story. All of us can do that.
love this story but i have noticed this a few times as futa seems to mean different things to different people and i feel like im missing something maybe you could clear it up for me.
I love this
Ohohohoho!
An interesting start. But I couldn't help wondering, where's Twilight? You didn't really explain that one.
Kinky.
Never enough futa.
Spike is with Rarity and Ember is a futa? Sorry, not my thing.
Hm.......
**Thumbs Up**
8001263 Pretty sure that i did. She's at the summit organizing it.
8001313 To each his own. I only hope you weren't one of the downvoters because of that.
8001342 I don't downvote stories just because I don't like 'em.
The futa sort of blew it...
Not a fan of futa but Spike X Rarity?
*favs*
and here I was hoping for a Spike&Ember fic... but I guess as long as he's included, I can't complain (that much)
I can definitely see that you refined what you had before. I though it was good the first time, just needed a little polish, and now it does. Looking forward to chapter 2.
Boars have tusks. Rams have curled horns.
8001489 Who says it won't be? I think Ember will join in soon.
8001587 Well, that's not how it seems to be going so far; she's been gawking over Rarity FAR FAR MORE then Spike (like the fact that she NEVER EVEN HINTED ABOUT HIM in the shower) , which is what I'm complaining about
8001497 Yes, but Ember's are tusk-like whereas Ram horns curl up like Princess Leia's hair buns
8001723 Oh don't worry, Spike's a part of this too. If you'll recall, Ember did like Spike's appearance, but her dick wanted Rarity, hence the shower scene.
8001370 Nah, it really blows in the next chapter *rimshot*
8001748 yeah, and after those 5 paragraphs, you practically never even mention her attraction to him again... unless you include the description "his strong hands" at the very end of the chapter...
and for the record, I'm only complaining because, again, I was expecting a Spike&Ember&NoOneElse fic (especially one where she's a futa) , but also because I'm not a fan of les clop
8001759 I understand. To each his own. All I ask is that you wait for the next chapter. But despite your complaints with this, I do hope you enjoyed the rest of it.
8001748 Okay, I just wanted to check because of the cover art. Kinda went
Ember sure does have sexy thighs in the cover art!
Ah, it's finally here! Glad I could be of help. Oh and it's marked "Incomplete?" I am really looking forward to seeing more.
8002369 Yeah, you gotta savor this kind of stuff
8002387 You know who to call for more help.
Oh man at the end was going "OOH NO NONONONONONONOOO!
Yes that was quite good. I look forward to more!
Very nice story I like it , not a fan of futa though.
8002803 Not a lot of people are, which is why I stayed away from writing it, but it was brought up that there was absolutely no futa Ember fics so I figured 'why not be the first?'
Bragging rights achieved!
Giggity.
8002387 From what I've read from Chapter 2, believe me, you will not be disappointed.
Sees fetish tags:
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I hope this is going where I think it's going.
Guys. You're not into futa, that's fine. You don't need to leave a comment about it like it's a problem the author has to fix. It won't change the story that you don't like intersexed characters. Either read and judge the story based on the writing, or don't vote and leave to go read another story. If we're reading erotica I assume we're most of us adults, let's act like it?
There's a part about the concept of this story that I am vehemently against but I'm still going to read it to completion because I choose to. If I found that I couldn't, I'd just go read another story. All of us can do that.
love this story but i have noticed this a few times as futa seems to mean different things to different people and i feel like im missing something maybe you could clear it up for me.
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What do you mean, exactly? Like what part are required to be considered futa?
My preference for futa fics… there must be at least one true female for me to really enjoy it
Wow this was a awesomely interesting and fun beginning I can't wait to see where this goes.