Hitting it Big

shynight #1 · Mar 10th, 2015 · 5 · 2 ·

How does she grow in size in the first place? Heck if I know, I'm just here to write lewd things.

Hah, exactly! This was smut for the sake of smut, and it was glorious!

You wouldn't happen to have any more story ideas stirring in that head of your's, would you? There's not nearly enough NSFW macro content on this site. And after Ponythroat (if you know who that is) stopped drawing a few months back, there's been a distinct lack of macro content on Derpibooru as well. Daddy needs his fix!

Dr_D

Dr_D #2 · Mar 10th, 2015 · 2 · 2 ·

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The only reason I can think of on why this has so many downvotes, is because those people are un convinced you are khorme.
Because this story is very good.

ZippySqrl

ZippySqrl #3 · Mar 10th, 2015 · · ·

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Ohh, neato. I'll give this a read once I'm back amongst the living.

Khorme

Khorme #4 · Mar 10th, 2015 · · ·

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I've had a few that I've been mulling around in my head for a while. One in particular was Rarity and a shrunken Trenderhoof. Don't know why half of my ideas are Rarity based.
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I'm honestly surprised there aren't more downvotes, I just need to try and make it worse next time. Also if someone was pretending to be me and writing big ponies doing lewd things I'd be totally okay with that.

Alticron

Alticron #5 · Mar 11th, 2015 · · ·

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Nice story, but there's a couple of minor spelling errors you may want to edit.

The event had shaken the pony, the heavy scent of purfume clinging to her now wet fur.

That should be "perfume".

The molding cracked and windows shattered as the building shook from the force, the marehood grinding away at the corner with dleight.

And that should be "delight".

Khorme

Khorme #6 · Mar 11th, 2015 · · ·

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Duly noted, that's what I get for skimming through spell-checking. Thanks for the heads up, changed a few other things as well.

meerkat8472

meerkat8472 #7 · Mar 11th, 2015 · · ·

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Why was she going to the ocean? Oh, to clean up, the ocean is the only thing big enough to do that now.

Commissar Derpy Hooves

Commissar Derpy Hooves #8 · Mar 11th, 2015 · · ·

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I am now mildly aroused......least coco Wasn't involved thank Gaben.

mcfarty

mcfarty #9 · Mar 11th, 2015 · · 1 ·

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Please make more!

Like, have Twilight get revenge on Trixie. That'd awesome.

Flash_Magnus

Flash_Magnus #10 · Mar 11th, 2015 · 1 · 1 ·

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Okay, this was pretty damn hot

scrounge

scrounge #11 · Mar 21st, 2015 · 2 · 2 ·

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There are a few places where you misspelled "Suri" as "Puri". Unless that was intentional.

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I think most of Ponyville would want revenge on Trixie. Maybe she starts at about an eighth of her normal size, just small enough that the prospect of getting fucked by Spike would be genuinely terrifying, and then gets shrunk smaller and smaller as she's passed around, until she's barely the size of a bug, and she's staring up at the last pony who'll be punishing her, Twilight. Trixie closes her eyes, waiting to be shrunk down to nothingness...

...And instead finds that Twilight has made her larger. Much larger. Enormous, in fact. A wicked grin crosses her face... Which lasts only the briefest of moments before Twilight renders her helpless with a spell preventing the use of her legs and horn. Trixie finds herself nothing more than a very large target, helpless against the ponies climbing all over her. Picture somepony getting gang-raped by breezies and you'll have a basic idea.

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I thought she did that because it's a standard thing for kaiju to do in between city-wreckings.

mcfarty