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Awesome covert art
5903397 Thank you.
I'll give you points for the premise. I'm a sucker for adventure stories, especially clop adventure stories. But you really need to work on your grammar dude. Plus, and I don't want to offend or anything, a little originality won't hurt. You got something interesting here, its such a shame to see it wasted.