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The Confederate Btw This Remebers Me Of Mass Effect
unity or harmony alliance and this is brilliant
I like where this is going!
the shadow alliance or ZOHN perty straight forward really. lol sparkle fruit
anyway onward to the next chapter.
lol the black hand or maybe its black hoof or just the alliance or twilight alliance or the twilight union
great chapter! i have probably forgotten some small detail again but have you gone into if vamponies eat normal food as a regularity?
as for the alliance; i have no "good" ideas...im kinda tired from studying right now so i keep coming up with ideas that really really suck
Equestria Race Alliance
The Dawn Concordance (Ushering in a time of peace and light out of the Darkness that the Liches are bringing, and the border between the night and day without making it sound like its named after Twilight)
Great chapter as always
572941 never said anything on it specifically but i have had scenes with them eating regularly and touched on it with the first feeding chapter.
572969 the Dawn is good, but concordance sounds a bit too political...hm... how about Dawn's Shadow?
Equestrian Hope
nice new chapter, also grateful for so much updates in a short time
how about the guardians
epic story and how do you type so fast don't stop great job
572560 GAH HOLY SHIT
573152 it will be explained my friend
573186 Dawn Guards...fucking got it. there's the royal guard, the Night guards. now the Dawn Guard- or guardians of the Dawn for the alliance name and not it's members. thanks a million
573011 , Hmm... Well its your choice of course, but if you ask me Dawn's Shadow is a bit more towards being a temporary thing, as by the time it gets around to noon, the Shadow is almost all gone, unless you are aiming to imply that its a temporary peace. Perhaps instead Dawn's Light or Dawn's Rise?
Edit: Evil delayed loading of comments. The Dawn Guards sounds like a great name. (To be honest I am terrible at coming up with names. Though since the only writing I do is Game Master notes for RPGs I tend to not have issues with it)
So.... many.....updates.....so.....little...time..... why do you torment me like this W H Y.
I think that guardians of the Dawn is perfect it could symbolize a new day new era/age or the beginning so seems perfect because it is the beginning of a unified world the beginning of a new future
Lawl, Sparkle Fruit, that's what she saaaaaaid. Epic chapter, good to see them about to end this shit once and for all, fuck those gouls, and especially those Wraiths.
573715 the war has yet to begin my friend
I really loved this chapter but did i imagined this or is it supposed that the blood's effects (twilight's epic strength from applejack) does not last forever??
574444 what do you mean? I don't think I've had anything to make that even implied...
574844 pic didn't work bud
i vote for naming it the Equestrian Corps.
Love the story, can't wait for the next update.
Also, I get the feeling that by the end of this Twilight is going to become a godslayer.
575929 god slayer? or goddess? we shall see my friend
God...
I loved it enough with Hecarim...
Now you I have Nocturne, Mordekaiser, and Varus.
I like Cass, don't get me wrong I am a Mage sort of guy (ANNIE 4EVER)
But brother... I was thinking "I'll just keep tabs on it because of Hecarim" but now I'm thinking "I'm gonna spend majority of my Non-LoL on computer hours keeping tabs on this guy's story."
Seriously
You have turned a good fanfic to an MLP Epic. You sir are my favorite online author
You should consider going proffessional
Just saying
Oh and for the alliance name we could try
The League of Duskhoof
Or
The Bloodfang Alliance
Just a suggestion
Why does this remind me of the Great GaHoole tree from Guardians of GaHoole... it had GaHoole seeds.
Also, how did you manage to cram so much heartwarming and D'awwww into a vampony-story?! It should not be possible!
As for a faction name... you've got trees, wolves, changelings, griffins, vamponies, dragons, ponies, and Phantoms, all allied against a force so twisted that it defiles life itself.
Perhaps, The Consanguinity of Dawn?
Consaguinity is a fancy word meaning blood relationship or blood alliance in this case, and Dawn both as a pun on Twilight's name (since she's obviously the most reknowned member of the faction save the leaders) and as an inspiration to denote that this war with lichdom is a dark night in history, and that they press onwards for a new day. Regardless, it is plain that nothing will ever be the same.
...
I should make a poem for this now that I think about it.
Countess Twilight in her castle. tons of powerful allies, my my, you have be busy Dark. How about the Heavens Alliance, seeing as that the Sun and Moon goddesses are heading this up?
obviously the Alliance sounds cool enough (really it may not be orriginal but nothing more is needed its like squadron a or alph squad simple and effictive)
Twilight said =(watched I think is what you wanted) Galio and Mordekaiser wrestling, Pinkie cheering Galio on while Nocturne watched with a smile.
can you plz give the picture of the library villa/plalace thing
i am slightly dissapointed with the name sparkle fruit, they would be more fitting if they were named either twilight or dusk apples, apples due to the fact that they are from ponyville, whose main export is apples.