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Nice. I can see that Twilight is already making good use of her newfound powers. She is certainly putting Applejack's strength to good use. I wonder what the other Mane 6 will think about this. This is great so far. Keep it up.
i wanna see some pinkie powers
luna is just all dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/shrug_Luna_apple.png about this situation
549500 well she did only leave that morning, and she did all that explaining before
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I was referring to the Twilight Saga series or whatever they call it, I really don't know. I only know of like the first 30 minutes of one of the movies I was forced to watch because my friend (Also a brony.) Watched it when he came over, of course I ended up falling asleep because it sucked so bad
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She's a vampony not a pony version of the Hulk. I do admit that line of thought was kinda amusing. Now we have the issue of Rarity dragging her off to the boutique. Rarity is possibly the one pony who can see thru the "I used a strength spell" bit considering she was kinda point blank in the whole deal and will likely have questions.
549590 you sir or madam, are a cunning man or woman
549590 you sir or madam, are a cunning man or woman
Think of all the power you could have Twilight.. all the power!
awesome chapter(s)!
i would have liked a bit more personal thoughts and emotional drama from twi, (she is taking this a little to easy for my taste); a few more doubts, a little more nervousness would really spice things up. you handled the thing with AJ almost exactly as i would have wanted you to (there is always room for more drama!). this is all i could think about for now in terms of thoughts about the story.
The concept is interesting but there are some grammar errors here and there.
Maybe I can do a thorough grammar check and spelling check later.
549844 that would be good, but I'm afraid it'd be nearly useless...unless it's a big mistake I don't have the focus really to go through and correct every single mistake...I've tried, but my mind skips over the little ones when I look over it for some reason, thanks for the fave, you're #115
Oh god don't let her drink pinkies blood i just REALLY don't want to know what she will get...
You know what, never mind i want super twilight that can break the 4th wall at the same time.
549868 BAHAHAHAHAHA I never thought of that. unfortunately I already have the future planned out
549876 UH still not sure if want
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that Luna emote isn't on the panel! WHAT SORCERY IS THIS!?
549526 I didn´t saw the movies, but I read the books...
It´s... acceptable...
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HaHa More, More Power
Ops wrong pony
I think my Avatar Pic Sums it up
"your blood would be full of strength" <- wa, wha, what? what the fuck does that even mean?! its full of strength? like the blood cells have muscle mass? or like a lot of proteins? i don't even... XD i've already had several "issues" with this story, but this one took the cake!
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It's magic, don't have to explain shit. XD
549614 I saw through Rarity also does that make me a cunning little colt?(The foreshadowing you did is what gave it away.) Then again I am replying to a comment several months old so your probably like WTF is this guy talking about? hmm I wonder if I replied to the right comment, yes I'm sure I did?
Hmm... Some characters seems OOC (Rarity=magic pro and Big mac TALKING, to name a few) and let's not forget those nefarious grammar mistakes. Seriously, you should get an editor.
I'm awfully sceptical to this story right now, but I will give it at least one more chance.
yeah as much as i like the setting for this i cant grasp the characters "im a vampony" "ok have some blood" no pony would say that they would all flip the fuck out
This is a goo...
Shut up if you finish that statement your dead got that Harmony.
*nods vigorously*
Now go back into your hidey hole or let's say you will have an accident
Inner Rage go back to your cage now. Anyway brilliant chapter well written though a bit rushed as Inner Rage was going to say with some... Colourful language Harmony you can come out now Inner Rage is in his cage
Anyone else imagining Twilight standing over one of her friends, lapping at their wounds when they get a large wound for some reason?
Like a dog drinking from a bowl, going in muzzle deep. Everypony present are so weirded out, so she just shouts, "What! Vampony saliva heals wounds, I'm just dressing the wound,"