Once the three pony clans made peace, things were going great. Then, the Fire Nation Alicorns attacked. They were outnumbered, and were wiped out. Now, the only ones left are the princesses.
Or rather, they should be. Young Lavender Springs finds herself in the aftermath of a war that she took no part in, but instead, condemned a foal to a life without his parents. Even if you live forever, won't guilt catch up to you in the end?
(Written by me, but this is more of a rough story-version of a roleplay involving Solar Flare... I don't remember all of it word-for-word seeing as it started a year ago or so)
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Good start. This story has a lot of potential. Unfortunately, this is where my journey ends. It's not a bad story, it just doesn't appeal to me specifically. That doesn't mean others won't like. I'm sure others will, but just not me.
You'll have people like that, not everyone will like your story. But there will be those that absolutely love it. So don't let my comment bring you down or something like that.
Because it really is a good idea. As well what you have here is the beginning of an amazing adventure for others. And remember this story can only be told by you. Nobody else could tell it in quite the same way as you.
Not a bad start, I just love it when there's some kind of mystery in the prologue.
6262848 ...Is it strange that I know exactly where this story is going?