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Lite Step didn't think this could actually happen to him. He had loving parents that supported anything he did. Well, mostly. He only had four real friends growing up and a little brother, who stuck to him like glue. Wherever he went, they followed him. Being a DJ, he had no choice to move from place to place. He was getting paid just enough to pay the rent at every place he went. Now, he's grounded at some village for basically forever, just because of some accident But, he has no regrets.

This is his story.

After chapter two( it really should have been after chapter one) this fic will be in Lite Step's P.O.V.
*Rewrite coming soon. Until then, this story is on hiatus*

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 4 )

Interesting. Semi-quickly paced, but luckily not fast enough to be TOO detrimental.
Unsure of how physically a knife could slice and dice through bone, because slice is like mincemeat, and dice is like small little cubes. I think you meant only sliced.

Comment posted by thekid0536 deleted Jan 21st, 2015

5530539  Thanks for the feedback! I should have gone into a little more detail on that scene. I mean I didn't actually say what type of knife it is. I was thinking of a small sharp and piercing machete or something.Oh and her bones weren't sliced at all. They were broken, should have cleared that up to. And I may sound like an idiot but I thought sliced and diced meant the same thing...And I promise to make the next chapter longer, it's gonna be interesting. And I kinda meant for this chapter to go by quickly because it was like a prologue, introduction type of thing.

5530675 Well, patience is a virtue.
(I thought the knife was more like one of those giant kitchen knives that would be used in horror movies)

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