Luna recalls memories that shine a whole new light on her banishment and life before.
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interesting would love to see more of this
This looks like it could be an interesting story, so I hope you keep writing.
Your grammar was mostly correct, but there was a slight error regarding the use of the word "tis," such as in
"Tis" is a contraction of "it is," so saying "it tis" is redundant.
Apart from that, I liked your writing and would definitely like to see more.
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Thanks!
I'll fix that. Thanks for clearing it up. I feel like an idiot.
Space 1999?