Pinkie Pie was never a pony to focus too much on one thing, let alone think about love, however, with the events that conspired during the defeat of Tirek, and Twilight gaining her new castle. Pinkie Pie begins to ponder whether Twilight felt alone in her new home, which was a rather depressing thought the more she thought about it. Only to cause her to think about Twilight even more in the upcoming weeks after Tireks defeat, soon enough Pinkie Pie can't help but begin to wonder if she likes her.
Upon receiving advice, Pinkie Pie is now determined to show Twilight a life beyond all that she knows. A story where chaos falls in love with order, and would like nothing more than to show that no matter how nonsensical things can get, there will always be order in the heart of it all, and that there will always be something to ground her from going to far.
While this story focuses mainly on the Relationship between Twilight Sparkle and Pinkie Pie, it will also show the relationships between the other mane six as well. As as the title suggests, it will all be an attraction of opposites.
Hope more soon always love a story where opposites attract
You're doing fine when writing Pinkie Pie, in my opinion, but if you feel like you need more energy, try emphasizing her movements more. You did a great job making her dialogue nice and energetic, but when it comes to Pinkie, her odd movement is really what gives her life. Keep up the good work!
she just let herself get roped into it right? Is there later a scene, where she has to confess, that she is actually not sure if she likes Pinkie right now, and Pinkie get´s dissapointed because she gave her false hope?
. At some point, even she has to be serious if she really wants to start something with her i suppose, she can´t just keep distracting.
Otherwise the chapter was not bad.
6130532 Well this is just the beginning of their relationship after all. Also Pinkie Pie is a strange character, at times she'll be extremely serious, at others completely nonsensical. This is of course completely related to her character personality trait as well, Pinkie Pie may never become completely serious cause that's not the person she is, but she'll be serious towards the people she likes but only in her way. I'd tell you the deal with the tunnel, but that would just spoil everything until the next chapter, I'm just gonna say give Pinkie Pie the benefit of the doubt
As for Twilight and her feelings towards Pinkie Pie, once again I can't spoil everything, but yes that will come up.
6131448 that´s okay, but in some way i don´t believe she can stay crazy in some moments, without destroying the moment, don´t know how to explain this to you better, i never meant that she has to change her personality, but she has to learn when there is maybe not the right time to be crazy.
I think even Pinkie being Pinkie, can be serious for a moment, just long enough to show her love, in a way Twilight understands how serious it really is.
new chapter please