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Read this through chapter 3, no comment on the story as there isn't enough to judge yet. Not to be hard on you, but please fix the grammar. Several of the sentences were missing punctuation (or was trying to be a run on sentence?). Also, is it the holy set that the MC is wearing, or the paladin set?
Please fix the spelling in the description.
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Paladin set, and thank you for your comment I'll attempt to fix my grammar in the chapters I have uploaded an attempt to keep a closer eye on my grammar but, it's sometimes hard for me as I have a mental thing that makes me fix it in my head without noticing.
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Have you tried grammarly.com ?
The app does surprising work on spotting mistakes. Though only works while you are in the browser the app is installed into. Might be a good final check when you submit your work. I don't have much experience with Grammarly, mostly assumptions.
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thank you for telling me about grammarly.com