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This story excites me!!! Please update often!!!!!
If I had ten dollars for every time an LOHAV story was created and completely sucked. I'd be rich right now and this would be on the list.
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Care to elaborate?
5577938 it's overdone and literally all of them follow the exact same premise.
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The blandness, the spelling, the titles, the repeated bull that I never stop hearing.
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"Eh winte tu teh pone dimbresnion ind hed secks wif twiit spikle."
Seriously, we don't need more of these stories unless you can actually make it unique.
Oh, wait, all those are taken.
Let's see where and how this goes
Already? dang you upload fast
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Unfortunately this is it for this week
DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
5579870 I can live with that. But PLEASE, no month to nearly a year between updates please!
What the actual fuck was that video?!?!?!?! Also what was that Elder God speech saying? By the way, I know absolutely nothing about Homestuck...so anyone know how to get into it so that I can understand it?
We are amused by his actions!
Your character is ridiculously overpowered.
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Just wait
yeah, that's about right for the ponies and main 6. zenophobes the lot of them
yep there should be a by law against panicking for no justified reason it put the flowers sisters and those like them in prison so hostile first encounters didn't happen
seriously what if Zercora was a representative of her people on her way to Canterlot..... should also have one for attacking any being without clear provocation ... though rainbow would likely be in permanent custody by a trained soldier then.
How has equestrian not been blacklisted by towns like this, surely some diplomat has gone to small towns and been scorned unjustly and tried to strike every trade route or cause diplomatic tension possible as a result.
5604839 more along that there herd animals... when one freaks the entire colony freaks, its a bit like ants once certain pheromones go out everything goes flight or fight. Sadly some like apple and rain tend to be charge in little / no thought. this basically thanks to the above mentioned over flighty ones and pinkie ( your lie-full false testament songs count) any new creatures that are the slightest bit scary, appearance, clothing or other are almost certain to results in a certain hostile first meeting.
(given all anyone else sees is people running in panicking it is hard not to consider there running justified when just moving towards the event)
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Ignore the guy below you. All he has done so far is summon some imps and carry a shield with a mirror charm on it.
Can't seem to find anything OP at all at the moment. Just because he reflected Rainbows attack does not mean that he is infallible.
Well now i know what to do in equestria, never be friends with rainbow, apples, or anyone who are afraid and attack first........ well im royally fucked everywhere that have ponies now i want kuroudo's powers.
So, Pinkie really IS a nSPACE eldr........, never mind! It's not like most of us haven't figured THAT out.
Thanks for the new chapter
Don't you think it's unreasonable for them to attack him based off of him attacking wild animals considering THEY'VE fought back against wild animals who tried to kill them before? It's like you're ignoring parts of canon when it doesn't suit your purpose.
Nice chapter. The fight scenes were great.
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precicely...
he should really ask Fluttershy whether or not she would of been fine with the manticores killing and eating him, since he's sapient....
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That wasn't the reason they attacked him. They intended to fight him from the beginning. Killing the manticores is something Flutttershy would never tolerate, even from her friends. For the rest it just showed how dangerous he was and further cemented the idea that they need to capture him quickly.
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True, that was one direction that I had thought about but I wanted Jack to come off as completely apathetic to the deaths of the manticores and I feel this was better. If the conversation wasn't interrupted by Twilight this may have been discussed
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But he's a sentient creature, not some wild beast. That doesn't exactly make a lot of sense. And shouldn't they, after ZECORA, know not to just judge something based off appearances?
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They weren't, to quote myself:
"I can understand what they were talking about now. It was like the shadows were coiling around me like some kind of second coat, that was alive. But it was more than that, just looking at the shadows just filled me with a feeling of wrongness. Like the shadows were some kind of primal fear. It wasn’t… bad, but it definitely would set anyone on edge."
I don't care how open minded you are, if you see something covered in moving shadows that make you afraid to even look at, your going to assume it's bad.
It's called survival instincts, and as a natural born prey species it is reasonable to assume that a pony's survival instincts are most likely highly developed.
5629709 We believe thou would find similar opinion when gazing on our little 'sombra's' companions in the coming chapter. ^..^ Though we wonder how cross overs may work with one's world.
I like this guy.
NEVER diss the tutorials
great chapter as always
keep up the good work
We are now perplexed by a gandelf the grey with morgan freeman's voice, we enjoy the image and sound of it.
5653379 The more complex the game seem to be, the more you need to pay attention to the turtorial.
dun dun dun!
Wow... is the end bit, part of a crossover with another authors fic?
Nice chapter.
keep up the good work
We do enjoy this tale of displaced.
Great job!
So is Rainbow Dash going to be the breath player?
That was random:0
Oh man, is a group of ponies about to get bit in the butt...
So, a group of power hungry Nobles that work in the backgrounds of society that have been undermining it's leaders for their own gain?
Seems Normal enough!
Works for me since it doesn't clog regular chapters
We're they primals?
No more info dumps pls, I can't get the reference nor the significance to the story.
I know its needed so the audience can get an understanding of things but instead of getting a good story, we get THIS.
Not that I don't appreciate it or anything, it must have took a lot of work putting this together.
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All in all most of this will simply be referenced but I'm trying to write it so that knowledge of Homestuck is not required to enjoy the rest of the story.
he has some good points...
yeah, mare do well is NOT my favorite episode in the serie XD good chapter please continue!
Took me a few minutes to remember this story line after I saw the update but no matter, GOOD chapter! Waiting for more
I was able to catch several words within the garbled god speak (welcome, hero of the void... Cthulu)
(listen to us...)
(Hero please listen to us, you are in grave danger... Cthulu)
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Quite commendable. I had not known of homestruck(homestuck?) so this info dump chapter helped.