Dusty isn't one for romance, never was, when he was invited to a sleepover by his friends, he never thought it would lead up to anything but it did.
But why did it happen?
Was it fate?
Dusty didn't believe in fate.
Dusty believed in riding it out till the end. Perhaps it was more a curse then a blessing.
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It doesn't really end... I mean, you never really get what happens. Does Twilight ever tell him? I feel this needs a sequel, or more chapters.
5464196 Sorry! I didn't publish the other chapters on accident!
Thanks for letting me know.
5464499 XD np.
Not bad at all now! As i still wish a sequel, i do love it.
5465287 Well, it just so happens I am working on a sequel, at first I thought about making a prequel but eh, just eh.
5466050 Might be a good idea, but i agree with you.
5467553 But don't you worry none!
I am making a prequel just as soon as I finish the...sequel...I don't know anymore. 
5468356 XD
I really enjoyed the way dreams felt like reality and tricked the reader (at least, I was tricked!). Cleverly done! Even more cleverly, if you intended such, was the foreshadowing of Dusty running into Twilight before he met Fluttershy in the dream. I honestly didn't expect things to go the way they did, and that's perfectly all right. Fluttershy is the type it'd be easy to fall for, and poor Twilight, getting so easily friend-zoned while she watches her crush fawn after another. She handles herself so very well to not jeopardize her friendship with Fluttershy or Dusty while still staying true to her feelings. Good for her!
I particularly enjoyed the "his side, her side" aspect. I'm a sucker for stories that have multiple sides, perspectives, opinions, etc... I like to know what went on from as many sides as possible.
I look forward to a sequel and a prequel, if you find the time and motivation to write one or both!
5468752 I really appreciate the kind words, but am I really that tolerable? I can't even bear reading my stories.