Life has never been better for Silent Knight, but he finds himself shackled to the past by guilt, anger, and regret. Even though he tries to hide his true feelings from those he loves, he knows that the secrets he keeps will come at a cost.
Very nice job! Though seems a little too formal personally. I find people tend to make Shining more formal than he actually was, might just be me though.
Very well written if you ask me. I'm certain that you have the potential to write something that will truly get the attention and respect it deserves.
602640 Thanks a lot. I appreciate that.
Very nice job! Though seems a little too formal personally. I find people tend to make Shining more formal than he actually was, might just be me though.