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Wasteland Warriors

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When Twilight and her friends cast a spell they are cast in a world where all life is extinct. A minuscule amount of ponies are still living, surviving against the threats that lie out of the world. Will they survive?

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The Letter (Prequel) · 21st Dec 2014 · 1,302 words
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Section 1 Chapter 1 · 27th Dec 2014 · 506 words
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Section 1 Chapter 2 · 27th Dec 2014 · 246 words
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Section 1 Chapter 3 · 28th Dec 2014 · 248 words
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DerpyPonyFTW

DerpyPonyFTW #1 · Dec 21st, 2014 · · · The Letter (Prequel) ·

Hey guys just saying. I need a person to be my editor. Please help guys :)
BTW from what I can see, there is two author note spaces.

The Dankest Meme

The Dankest Meme #2 · Dec 27th, 2014 · 2 · · The Letter (Prequel) ·

Not a bad concept at all, but like you said, it definitely needs an editor. There's a lot of moderate errors in terms of grammar, alongside some issues with dialogue and characterization. Overall, you've got a good idea, so you'd better run with it.