Stranded

by EternalShadow54

Epilouge

EPILOUGE-

The rest of the three remaining ponies lives were spent surviving on the accursed island.Pinkie Pie was the first to die of infection weeks later after the fight with Fluttershy. Her death was slow but painless. Her last words were spoken at the graves of her friends that met their untimely fates. Her final words were "I'm sorry..." An hour later, rarity found her dead beside the grave of her favorite friend, Rainbow dash.

A few months passed after Pinkie's death before rarity succumb to death by the poisoning of the Glindrak berries that killed Apple Bloom. A mosquito had apparently had a few drops of the awful berry and bite Rarity on the back left hutch. Her death was slow as her body could not process the berries fluid out in time before it spread throughout her whole system. She died three days later in her hoof-weaved bed with Apple Jack at the side tending to her need.

Apple Jack lived for three more years on the island alone. Everyday she visited her friends graves and reflected on her life. She was growing weak from the depression and loneliness. One day, she decided she couldn't handle it anymore. She couldn't bring herself to eat the same berries that had claimed her friend and sister. She, instead, decided to swim out to sea as far as she could before her body would give out. She swam for three hours before she finally could swim no more and let the waves take her. Her last thoughts was of her and all her friends, back in ponyville, enjoying their life. She cried one last tear before closing her eyes and giving up her stuggle. She died happy knowing that even though the last few years were hard, her whole life was definitely worth living because of the times she had with her friends...

THE END!

*Sidenote*- A friend of mine came up with this awesome saying for Apple Jack if she was ever rescued.
-Our minds were drugged by the islands isolation. It drove us insane, it drove us to tears, it drove us to death, it only drove us...no where. -Apple Jack

Comments

[That Guy]

Didn't see that you updated the story! Silly me. But wow, the rest of it was great! Some gruesome stuff, but I thought it was really good for your first fic!

[EternalShadow54]

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Thanks! I've started another already, though. Glad ya liked it.

[EternalShadow54]

699738 Thank you so much!
Glad ya like it.

[Trave]

Well, you certainly have talent!
That was very well written...
Now here comes the part where I break down crying
That was a terribly heart-wrenching story and I hope to God that you, the mane six or anyone else in this freakin universe never has to go through that.
I honestly have no idea how many happy stories I will have to read to counter this one.
If I'm ever trapped on an island with my friends I will literally show more love than Gondi, Jesus, and whoever else and do as much work to help things keep running! This will be my new survival guide. I don't care if I get killed as long as this doesn't happen.

Anyway thank you for your time and effort.
Like I said you have talent.... Please write something really happy!

Random fact of the day: Applejack woke up next to Rainbow Dash in a loving embrace realizing it was all a dream. Rainbow Dash slowly stirred and they both Bucked all morning long the End!!!

[EternalShadow54]

1485185 Aww... shucks. Glad you enjoyed my story so. I have other works if they may interest you. Now writing a happy story? I've thought of it, but can't ever bing myself around. If I ever do though, I'll be sure to let you know.

[Trave]

1488006

Yay an author replied to me
I'm so happy right now!!!!

Your a fantastic author.... come on I know you have a happy story just waiting to burst out (Not in the Alien sense)

Random fact of the day: Everypony is dumb, Trixie is better than everypony - A message from the Trixie is better than Everything Foundation... Trixie I'm not typing that... OK fine...sigh... Twilight Sparkle sucks Trixie! You do realize what that sounds like right?

Anyway goodluck and keep on writing!!!

[EternalShadow54]

1488268 I shall! And you just keep on being you!

[Brony of the Revolution]

1490393
I just noticed something that I think you should know.
In the story you've written you were writing Sweetie Belle as Sweetie Bell.

[EternalShadow54]

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Yes. I wrote this before I was even a fan of the show actually, so I didn't know how to spell the characters names. Fanfictions are actually what brought me to the show and inspired my newfound love for writing. This story was my first, and I left it and all its many mistakes as a reminder of where I've come from in my writing career. Thanks for pointing that out though. Hope you still enjoyed.

[Brony of the Revolution]

1741977
Alright, that makes sense.
Still, great story!

[EeveePie]

The rest of the three remaining ponies lives were spent surviving on the accursed island.Pinkie Pie was the first to die of infection weeks later after the fight with Fluttershy. Her death was slow but painless. Her last words were spoken at the graves of her friends that met their untimely fates. Her final words were "I'm sorry..." An hour later, rarity found her dead beside the grave of her favorite friend, Rainbow dash.

That's just...upsetting.
Not to mention Pinkie Pie is best pony.