Love pulls and tugs at the heart, simmering lowly under its thin sheet of conception to only burst out and confuse you with it's unknown ways. It's a feeling one obtains, yet has always had. This is my story, the love story of Leafy Summers, and my slow decent into a complicated triangle of emotions that forever changed my view on the wretched word "love".
A story idea that was literally suffocating in the recess of my mind. I had to write it, and I swore I'd put everything I could into this one. It'll be my first real and unquestionable attempt since my story "Just an Old Ponytale", and that's been months ago. This is a first person point of view of Leafy Summers, a stallion who travels to the quaint town of Mareietta and soon encounters the two mares that will throw his heart into a conflict with itself, and forever change his perspective.
All OC's, just like I like it. Canon character love stories are too numerous in my opinion.
Cover art is by ~Ask1Deidara1Anything on DeviantArt.com
Not bad
As a fan of going full OC myself (and well aware the perils therein!) I say it again. Not bad
Gets a bit prosey here and there, but I like that if others don't. The writing style is a tiny bit tough to chew in places, but all in all It's a fine start to a story.
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You are the first to comment, and I think, "Woo~! Not that bad of a story!" A few days and two chapters later. "Hmmm... Still the only comment. Oh well."
Regardless, I'd still like to thank you for said comment, as late as it may be.
Well thank now my head hurts from the confusion. loving the story btw
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Yes, be confused and eager for the next part. All part of my evil plan. Hehehe...
And thanks.
I'll do my best to not disappoint!
1695648 taking over the world with pure confusion.....thats just crazy enough to work
The vicious triangles of love. Heh heh heh heh I'm done with that.
Reading this now!
How cute, love at first sigh for Rezzly Reed eh?
It's official, I like Lane the best.
Lane got more chance than Rizzly now eh? Let's see how he handles it next chapter!
When's next update on this? :D
finally,totally worth the wait ,hope next one comes soon
I was wondering when is next update to this?