Sonic Refraction (Part 2)
Tricks for the friends are set into place
Trapped together their problems are faced
A silent hero appears wielding epic bass
The hero then leads them into the fight
Six friends are losing, try as they might
A friend on the sideline joins their plight
The friend sings out matching the beat
Their power united ensure evil’s defeat
With their power gone the trios on the retreat
Peers realize what was behind the grand feature
A friend is no longer viewed a vile creature
Friend becomes student, student becomes teacher
Unknown to all an adventure’s set sail
For a studious counterpart is hot on their trail
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Very well made, the note on Tirek about 'evil working alone' was especially chilling.
5325485 Thank you, I try.
is pretty good
5332226 Thank you, any specific thoughts?
5332256 beside it's not my style
5332262 Okay. Each to their own.
5332300 yup
To be honest, I do not like poems to much.
The ones you wrote are fine, I guess, thought the Chrysalis one's seems worse than first two.
Demonic Rebellion (Part 1) didn't seems to good as well. I marked the part that seemed odd.
5335217 What seems odd about it?
Also, oddly enough, I wrote the first 3 awhile back and basically everyone that read them said that Chrysalis was the best out of the 3.
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I dunno, personal preference I quess. I just like two first more.
5337048 okay.
Given how stubborn a Twilight was at not accepting the pinkie sense who had GROWN UP WITH MAGIC AROUND HER, I dread to think about a Twilight who comes in with the prejudice that magic is just a excuse for things unanswered, rather than simply a ANOTHER set of rules to learn and understand.
5362585 Wow, hadn't thought of that. That's going to be interesting. On another note, Did you like the poems?
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Sadly I don't have the talent for poetry.
5364516 I'm sure you make up for that somewhere else, but you didn't answer the question. Did you like them?
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yes
5364602 Oh, yay.
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Thank you, I'm glad that you liked them. Which poem was your favorite?
Poetry is nowhere near as popular in fanfiction as it should be. I´ll give this a look later!
7177369 I look forward to hearing your thoughts after you read it. Out of all my Fimfiction works this is the one I'm most proud of and I'm glad others see peotry as something we need more of.
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Well, I´m not a poet nor know much about it, so I don´t believe I´ll be able to provide a detailed review on this series or even say if they work on a technical level.
However, I did enjoy them and in certain parts the creativity you used to describe several events was pretty interesting to see unfold. So I think this project was a success. Well done
7208885 Thanks that means a lot to me. Also, it's good to hear from people that don't have a background in the art.