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And Eat it Too

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The Canterlot 'Warrior of the Sweet Tooth' pastry eating contest, has been a quinquennial (def: every 5 years) event in Equestria for the last 400 years; with Princess Celestia, its 78-time defending champion. Now for the first time in centuries, her highness has a worthy opponent in her path. Miss Pinkamena Diane Pie.

Inspired by KP-ShadowSquirrel http://kp-shadowsquirrel.deviantart.com/art/IT-IS-ON-298393900

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SlayerBVC

SlayerBVC #1 · Apr 27th, 2012 · · ·

Feel free to list any corrections you think are needed.

Sentient AI

Sentient AI #2 · Apr 27th, 2012 · · ·

The story could use some work (it felt a bit clunky at times), but still enjoyable nonetheless.

Resda

Resda #3 · Apr 27th, 2012 · 1 · ·

Great story! It felt a tad rushed at certain points, namely the space between rounds 1 and 2 and the entire anticlimax of round 4, but overall it was a fun read.

I was kinda hoping for some tension in the final round, a neck and neck battle between two rivals. Instead, Pinkie utterly curb-stomped the Princess! I am unsure as of yet whether this is better or worse.

EvilEnchantress