A young pegasus, born immortal, witnesses his entire village killed by the Equestrian war machine and spends the next thousand years of his life in bitter hatred for Princess Celestia. Unable to settle down and unable to make friends, he eventually grows tired of bitterness and travels to Canterlot for reconciliation. However, when he arrives he learns the truth behind the war and learns an important lesson in forgiveness.
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Before I read this, I want to address something.
The only race of pony that can be deemed "Immortal" are alicorns.
This seems very promising, and it looks like a pretty interesting concept, but remember in the future that pegasi aren't immortal.
This is me, being very happy i read this fic.
i do find it sad that this is complete, though...
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I know that only alicorns can be immortal, it is referenced in the story. It was really just a convenient plot device to help drive the story and tie it together. I was careful not to actually change any accepted canon, however. I don't expect this character to be added to the show. It is simply a backstory and justification for a character I created, along with helping to cement it as an original character.
I feel that he let go his grudge too easily, if it was me. I would lash out at Celestia based on what he went through.
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That is a good point. However, the idea is that he is tired of holding a grudge forever. He isn't some evil ancient being like Discord, he is just an extremely unfortunate pony who has had the further bad luck of happening to be immortal.
amazing, absolutly amazing! outstanding! bravo!
Like I said in my last account (I forgot my Password and username
) Amazing! outstanding job! 
Please make more my dear sir!
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Hmm, maybe I will. And maybe, I'll put you in it.
I didn't like it. Too fast for the ideas it explored. Less than 5k words to do absolutely everything. I feel like it could have been so much more, much less with the confrontation between he and Celestia. It read like a 1960's Spiderman cartoon.