• Published 3rd Nov 2011
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Goodmorning world! - Svenskel



Series of REALLY really short fics starring my oc's

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The Greens/Goldenbeat

This is the first of the Goodmorning World! series made by me they are really short and fast to read so enjoy!



The morning was beautiful and Green flash was in her bed listening to the birds. The morning breeze that came through the window and went over her face cooling it down was a contrast to the warm breath hitting her face from the other side, and with every breath the other pony's mane tickled her on the cheek.
-How long have you been awake? She asked
-You know that you're really cute when you're relaxing right? Was Spookysins response
Greenflash giggled.
-You didn't answer my question.
-I know. Greenflash was about to say something more when she felt Spookysins breathing slowing down, she was asleep again.
In the room next door Greenpunk waked up to the sound of her sister giggling and she mumbled
-Are they at it AGAIN?! they kept me from sleeping all night. I swear that if they wake me up again I'll kill Spookysin on the spot.
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When the disco music of her alarm clock started Goldenbeat jumped out of her bed but she didn't turn the alarm off. She danced as she put on her tomboy-ish shirt and next thing she was humming and fixing her hair. When she turned the alarm off she saw she was late. So she slided down the stairs and ran through the kitchen grabbing a breakfast-bun in the passing saying:
-Hi mom,bye mom. Before her mother could answer she was outside.She felt the wind in her hair as she ran to the high-school. She ran to the locker and looked in her pockets for the key, she couldn't find it anywhere, she forgot it at home. While cursing her stupidity she remembered Earthbreeze had a spare so all she had to do was wait, and becoming later than she already was. As she waited her humming started again.

Comments ( 4 )

this sounds like g3

688481 what is that?

You need some stylistic work and editing. Otherwise, it's kind of interesting for its length.

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