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Haki, Ponies and, Devil fruits

After a normal guy is pulled into equestria, he must try to find a way home but will he want to leave if he does or will he choose to stay in this world of haki, ponies, and devil fruits

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chapter 1: show and tell · 17th Oct 2014 · 1,905 words
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Explanations · 9th Apr 2015 · 2,326 words
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SiIver Spoon

SiIver Spoon #1 · Mar 7th, 2015 · · · chapter 1: show and tell ·

Title:

Haki, ponies and, devil fruits.

Correction: Haki, Ponies, and Devil Fruits (There doesn't have to be a period at the end of the title.)

Description:

After a normal guy is pulled into equestria, he must try to find a way home but will he want to leave if he does or will he choose to stay in this world of Haki, ponies, and devil fruit!?

Why does "Haki, ponies, and devil fruit", have to be in bold? Capitalize the "e" at the beginning of "Equestria". Description is kind of short.

Chapter:
Properly capitalize the title of chapter one.

This story needs a little more work. ~ Silver Spoon