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jgilley63


a short, fat hairy guy from arkansas who enjoys ponies.

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After a normal guy is pulled into equestria, he must try to find a way home but will he want to leave if he does or will he choose to stay in this world of haki, ponies, and devil fruits

Chapters (2)
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Title:

Haki, ponies and, devil fruits.

Correction: Haki, Ponies, and Devil Fruits (There doesn't have to be a period at the end of the title.)

Description:

After a normal guy is pulled into equestria, he must try to find a way home but will he want to leave if he does or will he choose to stay in this world of Haki, ponies, and devil fruit!?

Why does "Haki, ponies, and devil fruit", have to be in bold? Capitalize the "e" at the beginning of "Equestria". Description is kind of short.

Chapter:
Properly capitalize the title of chapter one.


This story needs a little more work. ~ Silver Spoon

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