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After her encounter with The Ringmaster, Crosswind grew a lot more eager to try the 'fruits of Equestria.' If dicks could be called fruits. If not, then she wanted to try the Dicks of Equestria.
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Winter The Gimp

Winter The Gimp #1 · Oct 15th, 2014 · · ·

ahaha the chapter name was funny.

I'm here to read, not to masturbate to words, but I will go on. 6:28 PM, I shall go on to read this..

Winter The Gimp

Winter The Gimp #2 · Oct 15th, 2014 · · ·

Ohh kay..

I believe I've come to a conclusion. 7:33 PM(I was watching airsoft videos, then I had to eat.)
Anyway, I've no idea on what this would get. 8/10? or maybe a 7. Nope, 6/10. It's settles, O my sister(?).

I hate clopfics, practically despise them, but I enjoy reviewing them, and even better if the like/dislike thing is uneven. However, I don't tear them up on personal shit, instead, I focus on the actual story.

It didn't feel as if the gryphon was a ringmaster, more of some super dooper fancy gryphon who had a fancy goloss-ish sort of voice. The fact that the circus was slightly mentioned was a bit of a fuckercluster, and even then, with a change of nouns and some dialogue, you could've easily made the Ringmaster an 1800 British Naval Officer, who had been out for a gander and stumbled upon a rather kikked woman. I feel as if the creamy pony was supposed to be a character, like a legit character not a siderman, but was just kicked out of the story. I felt real confused like in terms of dialogue and who it was aimed to. But I understood it all, in the end.

So yea 6/10, buddy. It made me laugh like crazy, and it finished me off before I can breathe.

"I believe that we're ready for the.. Main event."

That and some other quote that I'm too lazy to write. That's why I enjoy reading these, they're funny to laugh at, and even better to criticize. No offense, at all.

Cadences Clop Closet

Cadences Clop Closet #3 · Oct 19th, 2014 · · ·

5141640 Oh, none taken at all, loyal subject! I actually adapted and posted this as part of a dare, and now that I've got a taste for it, and experience co-writing with my partner in this, I think I might be ready to push Crosswind a little further...