Fredrick falls into Equestria and he is allowed to stay in the castle for his troubles. There, he meets and quickly befriends Princess Luna, and their quickly evolving relationship allows them to explore the 'benefits' of being close, best friends.
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Aw, so they're 'Friends who want to be in a relationship, but thanks to politics they can't, so they have to be friends with benefits.'
Freinds with benfits
5178572 The idea of "friends with benefits" is VERY subjective, I've seen, despite how it should be defined. How I've experienced it in the real world, however, is two people who pretty much just meet up for sex and the occasional small talk. "fuck buddies" if you will. I don't see that here, I consider it more as "best friends who trust each other enough to explore intimacy" type of thing. Odd, but friendship and its many levels is a very odd concept, especially when you throw sex into the mix. This is kinda what inspired this story, actually... getting through the oddness of a lack of definition of their status and how they survive the whole thing without being able to make the jump.
So, in these terms, I see FwB with a negative connotation.
5178586 Read my comment below. As well, I mentioned that they would not be falling into that in entirety.
5178587 ah.
U to cool
At least he isn't named 'Anon' anymore.
~Crystalline Electrostatic~
5178599 Yeah it was losing its touch on me as well. I'm kinda digging the name lol
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5178604 I generally can't stand when people use a character named 'Anonymous' (except for those few occasions where the plot demands it, like amnesia or something). It isn't that hard to come up with a real name for the character.
~Crystalline Electrostatic~
5178612 I guess, but it was a bit difficult for me. At first I was against it because it seemed like a self insert (how would you know that that's not my name? etc.) Maybe I was just paranoid. That, and most names were really irritating, especially in certain situations. Finally, I decided on Fredrick. Simple and effective in my opinion.
How could they not have the power, the have the highest power possible in equestria. Their word is literally law .
5178627 Is it though? That depends on who you ask, and it varies story to story. I did it this way because otherwise, it would be waaaay too easy. Here it's pretty much a Constitutional Diarchy or a Split Diarchy, where yes, the two of them would reign supreme, but there would be checks and balances from the parliament or other ruling bodies to prevent bad things from happening (such as the rise of a dictator). Consider England's government or even America's. The President is the supreme leader but can easily be stunted.
Umf
love his inner mind
5178587 the only phrase that comes to mind for me is "Undercover Lovers"..that phrase always makes me laugh.
5178732 Fuckin lol that phrase made me giggle too goddammit! But hilariously enough, it fits perfectly.
But it wouldn't be any fun if they had to stay that way the entire time. I'm sure everyone would figure out in time that they're going to say 'fuck it' at some point and do it anyway
...I get the oddest feeling that they should have asked Celestia...or Twilight/Cadance...Quite certain they would find something...Twilight because BOOOOOOOKS, Cadance because POWER OF LOVE.
Do it or you're gay.
His subconscious reminds me of my own.
5178760 Lol with hormones running wild you expected them to act RATIONALLY??
And don't worry, we're just getting started
I..... "LOVE IT" Keep it up this is turning out really well.
5178765 ..Maybe after a rut or two.Restart their brains, ya know?
I love how Fred's subconscious is essentially an awesome version of the reader.
Friends with benefits. I've actually had one of these relationships before. It was tight
Lovely chapter. Looking forward to the new one
5178605 why am I the only one to have liked your comment? lol
'Do it or you're gay' pretty much what both a guy's thoughts and friends say in these knds of situations
awesome....just awesome.
as fredrik and luna
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stay classy
Sexy and still fucking adorable
5178635 True, but surely she has live long enough to not care what others think, when it comes to this topic. But i guess that also depends on, her past relationships. But if they did make it official and the nobles did try make his live worse, they could just through their asses in jail or the dungeons or what ever. Once they got proof that is :)
Frederick and Luna have both been 'political zoned'. Shame that. Let's see if they can work it out.
5178826 I know right.
Also,
Pitching a tent was not the greatest way to initiate a heart-to-heart.
I laughed a lung out at that.
5178612 Not a big fan of the 'Anonymous' name either, although I mostly can't stand it because I always end up picturing this guy in the story
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OMG ssooooooooo awsome!
5179081 Pretty much actually! If you remember reading, Luna doesn't give a single shit about them, but she doesn't feel it's fair to put Fredrick through it regardless. It's gonna get to the point where they're gonna say fuck it and do it anyway lol. And naturally, Celestia is gonna help out and then hilarity ensues. Lol this story is FAR from over
Awww Celestia care for Frederick too, that is so cute, and knowing their little squads, if Frederick is as close to them as I think then he must had know about their arguments pretty well, and will help Luna gain some of her pride before Celestia start to tease them…or just to make sure Celestia doesn't had any ideas.
Hey Luna is good analyzing, Celestia is good at obtaining info why not, give poor Federick something too, you know to be fair, and I think what to, I don't know the name but I know what could work.
Celestia with a smug grin saying goodmoring to him when they go to work he will be all innocent playing along, saying good morning too.
Did you sleep well?
"Oh yeah I slept like a rock"
Really now? I'm glad to hear it, I imagine it will had something to do with my sister?
"Yes she actually help"
Is that so? So I imagine you 2 talk about, little Lu lie?
"Eeyup"
That it? Are you sure there is nothing else you wish to tell me? Celestia take a sip of her tea
"Oh yeah, I play with your sister nipples while she sandwiched my crotch with her ass, and we had an amazing make out session before falling asleep"
Celestia spit her tea Frederick! that is my sister you are talking about!
"You ask me, and speaking of ask, if I remember correctly I ask a certain sun princess not to talk with Luna until I had a talk with her, but for some reason on my way back to the castle a mysterious gold shouting star appear near a lake where I found Luna swimming on her night dress"
Celestia face get pale and she start to laugh nervously
"Now Celly, is there ANYTHING you want to tell me?" He ask with a smug smile
Oh please, please tell us you will think about it
Nice! I may have to take a look at this chapter upon next retiring to my bunk.
Nice chapter.
5179504 i must say that dialogue was funny
5179658
Right? that is why I wish the author use it or something like that very soon
5179504 That was amazing
5179722
Yeah I can see it work in that scenario
5179504 Fuckin' lol. You provide excellent motivation for use
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Oh thank you sir, would this mean you will consider on using it? you certainty will had my approval
I shall call him Freddie
Would ponies even use that swear?
So she is getting more shrill?
Little bit of repetition.
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With how you are trying to it would be pronounced "leed", rhymes with "peed". The past tense of lead is "led". The other type of "lead" is a metal.
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SOLD!
That's called testosterone, and it's one hellofva hormone.
Interesting predicament they are finding themselves in. Celestia said she wanted to help so maybe she knows of some sort of loophole?
Guh, frikking frakking nobles.....they deserve a ass whooping for merly existing!!!
You haz my interests. Proceed.
5179504 make out session, not make up session. Unless that what Fred's into I guess.
Good Chapter. Glad this story updates often.
Best conscious 2014!
*Shakes head slowly*
We have lost a brother, he has come far but was shot down.
5180028 right then