Fredrick falls into Equestria and he is allowed to stay in the castle for his troubles. There, he meets and quickly befriends Princess Luna, and their quickly evolving relationship allows them to explore the 'benefits' of being close, best friends.
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Good to see he's getting beta at it. (Also, extra space before closing quote-mark.)
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Well, what can I say? He can be a diamond in the rough.
I kinda know how Frederick feels about Luna out-eating him. A year or so back I went to lunch with my little sister at Subway. We both ordered the same thing and started eating at the same time. But for almost the entire meal she outpaced me somehow. Though in the end I finished first because she couldn't eat the entire footlong sub in one sitting.
The sex scene with Luna was, as usual, insanely hot and it was entertaining to watch her dance at the Gala with Frederick. The Mane Six's meeting with Frederick was nice, especially Rarity and Fluttershy's interaction, and I laughed a bit at the scene of Stella strongarming Windfire into dancing with her (seriously, it seems that no pony other than Celestia or Luna could ever hope to stand up to her). The scene with Blueblood at the end was heartwarming as despite everything he loves his aunts and has developed a tolerance for Frederick. Now, let's hope to see if Blueblood's plans would benefit Equestria. Thanks for the amazing chapter.
It's a nice change of pace to see a story that does not portray Blueblood as a complete asshat~
Pinkie, Applejack, Fluttershy, Rarity, Rainbow Dash, Spike.
That's only six. Twilight was already at the gala when her friends arrived. So it was just five of the elements who arrived here with spike not six and that means only six people should have entered here and only six people crowded close to Twilight and Fredrick.
6660499 FACK. Of all the things to screw up. Lemme fix that
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I read that as "eating out" >.<
Needless to say, I was very confused at the following lines :P
6660610 Hilariously, rereading the chapter myself, I double-took because I thought I read the exact same thing.
Thanks for making my night you magnificent bastard.
God, i fucking love stella, lol.
also that music just felt right, great choice.
Good onya mate! Great to see you've required your mojo.
That was fuckin' outstanding. I enjoyed it immensely. Only one bit I didn't understand...
What was with the "no mom's spaghetti to be found" line? Someone might need to explain that one to me. Maybe It's just 'cause I'm just some fucktard Aussie but I haven't a flamin' clue what that meant.
I kinda wanna see Fred and Luna have a threesome with someone else, whether it be Sunlight from the restaraunt, being all flirty with her etc, or Stella walking in on them and Luna wanting her to join in
...
Things are about to go to hell huh? Lines like that is just asking for something to go very wrong. Very fast.
That awkward moment when you're in a public place and the story you're reading starts to head towards sexy times.
Was that an SAO reference I saw there?
Just one thing.
A beautiful, cream-colored mare was urged forward in her conservative green dress, and she adorably hid behind the majority of her hair.
“I’m Fluttershy…”
Great to see a update, it made my night.
1828 and I actually own that album for the swing song so I played the whole thing
That, Blueblood, is what a work friend is. You don't hate the person, but at the same time they're not exactly a bro.
Imagine Luna getting pregnant with his child...
That was fun, may I have another? Looking forward to more.
Keep up the good work. Deus tecum.
Well, things seem to be going smoothly...
Too smoothly...
If my knowledge of fanfiction tropes serves me well, now is right about the point that something will go horrifically wrong. Perhaps one of the nobles makes the mistake of voicing dissent, which leads to further dissent? Changelings? (Please no). Frederick accidentally does something to actually make it onto Blueblood's shit list?
I await the next update with baited breath and an umbrella for the moment shit hits the fan.
6660118 *Rolls up newspaper and taps on the nose with it* No... bad... no bad puns from you!
Hey Flammen, Loved the chapter, but I gotta ask.
Is the Applespike One-shot coming out soon?
6669208 Behind on a lot of things. I need to finish the next chapter of Equis first.
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No worries mate. I'm really behind on my first story, and I started a new one recently.
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I hope you didn't use today's copy of the Los Angeles Times.
6670014 whys that?
This is definitely my favorite portrayal of Blueblood in a story. Good job.
I really like this chapter it flows super good and has grate detail.
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Y'know. . . the fresh prints of Bel Air?
6670936 alright go to your room you are on time out.
So, I been busy. Imagine my surprise when I saw some one reading this while waiting for something to cook during my culinary courses yesterday. I am suddenly friends with a guy I speak to about once or twice a week, despite him being my boss during work. So, if that isn't an encouraging endorsement, I don't know what is.
I would like to mention that since we truly don't know what Blueblood's end game is, might I suggest that the tag "Mystery" would be added to this story?
And Windfire's surprise appearance... well, surprised me.
6673708 Hahaha really??? You found someone reading this story? Well shit... small world after all, huh?
You actually make me like BlueBalls first time for everything nice work keep it comin
This entire chapter has solidified this story as my favourite on the site. Everything just seemed to fall into place, and although i had a twelve hour break halfway through this story because i was called into work i came back and instantly carried on. Congratulations Flammenwerfer, your fantastic.
Damn, i WISH i could write blueblood like that...
Your Blueblood is the best Blueblood ever written in the whole fandom. Respekt Flammen!
Least there is some sensibility in this story. Tomatoes are nasty.
I feel "though" should be removed and the second "later" replaced with something else. Both words create some repetition.
Four. Three. Two. One. SMASH!
How does one suppress arthritis? It is a degeneration of the joint.
The appropriate answer would have been, "Sorry, but I only know swing dancing." Then they tear up the dance floor.
Honestly, I wasn't expecting this. I added the last comment for fun.
Your little something got me thinking of an old game I used to play years ago.
That's dirty.
"led"
Isn't the term usually "flushed"?
I think this part of the sentence was never quite finished.
Honestly hoping this has a happy ending, seeing as things are going too well currently to continue without something unfortunate coming to pass.
That is, of course you plan on continuing this story beyond this chapter.
Time will tell, I suppose.
6707456 There are two more chapters remaining. This was too lighthearted of a story to have a bittersweet or sad ending, and in all honesty, the readers would probably crucify me if I made things sad at the end.
6707475 i just like it. don't think anything of it, it does not mean i like you.
6660947 Knees weak, arms are heavy, vomit on his sweater already, Mom's Spaghetti. Eminem's "Lose Yourself".
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A valiant effort on your part mate, I appreciate the attempt.
But that doesn't make a fuckin' lick o' sense.
My fault not yours. If anythin' it just leaves me more confused. I'm just too much of a dumbarse to get it?
6721044 No, it's just a play on song lyrics, m80
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Oh, So it's just 'cause I'm just an old cunt?
Well then, that makes it all beer and blowjobs.
see, its that last line that tells me things arent going to go well very VERY soon. still, major plot point out of the way, they are out in the open and public. so i am wondering, besides the prank war, what is left to this story? surely there is stella, but at the moment there are no major problems.
take your time with the next chapter, this is one i will read to the end, where ever it may lead.
6730769 Yeah in a blog post, I mentioned come part 20 that there were five parts left, meaning as of now, there are two parts left. I never really intended for this fic to get dark or delve into anything REALLY bad and nerve-wracking, so ultimately, the worst of the worst has really passed: their relationship together is not in any danger. The bad shit, I'm saving for the followup AU story. Some people may not like the ending on a happy note already but honestly, I never intended this to draw out incredibly long. You and others will see what I mean... ultimately in a story I want something going RIGHT for once lol. You're pretty much right though... what else IS left?
That, and it's also a product of the beginning, not conceiving of any other background, nefarious activities happening that could be detrimental for all parties. Either way, I'm glad you've enjoyed everything thus far, and I hope you'll be satisfied with how it concludes.
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either way you gotta do the prank war on fred, and you have a well known character called stella. perhaps someday you can go back and write things from her perspective. or just write more about her, im sure you could pull something off.
6730787 Oh ho ho, the ENTIRE next chapter is devoted to Fred getting pranked
And Stella is my favorite OC that I've created, and she is the most well liked of them all. I'm really glad she's caught on with all of you like... it touches me in ways no woman ever could. I've already put out a oneshot with her (RE: De-stressing) and intend to release one more before her own major story which happens to be the AU of this fic: My Other Best Friend, Stella. It's essentially what you were hinting at but a bit different: what happens if the roles of Luna and Stella are reversed? That's the idea, and you can imagine the shenanigans that can produce.
I ultimately hope to make that story better than this one.