Fredrick falls into Equestria and he is allowed to stay in the castle for his troubles. There, he meets and quickly befriends Princess Luna, and their quickly evolving relationship allows them to explore the 'benefits' of being close, best friends.
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I love this fucking story! Hahahahahahaha oh God Fred is in for a surprise
Keep up the great work!!!!
Well, Fred and Stella are gonna bang. Is that a threesome I see in the future?
6420580 There will be no future threesomes in this story.
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Awe, okay...
Stella's backstory and the details of her personality and thoughts about her duty/loyalty to Luna was interesting. The scene with Frederick and Luna was sweet and romantic. Lastly, given the skimpy prank that Luna and Celestia are planning with Stella's involvement, I think Frederick would end up blueballed at the end and Stella would probably know the Princesses on a more personal level.
Oh yeah! I can't wait for.....
.......wait......
......."last five chapters"?
Right after reading that, I already know it's going to be funny,
This will end in embarrassment and cross-popping veins. As long as nothing goes terribly wrong, it'll be a massive hoot.
Also nice romantic scene there, but I'm gonna urge you to not use "as" so much, or ridiculous redundant wordplays like "fleshy muscle" at all. It sounds like you're trying to make the narrative too flowery, which is bad, and you're trying too hard, which is worse.
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I'm guessing he'll end up strapped to a wooden "X" in the Royal Fungeon as Luna and her nightguards take on a Nightmare-dominatrix theme. Hopefully Celestia the Pure can swoop in and save his mortal soul? Or will she be "defeated" and corrupted by Nightmaremoon leaving him all by his lonesome... and still tied to that board.
Then again, that doesn't sound like much of a prank. More like royal roleplaying behind soundproofed doors.
The last five chapters...?
This means that the end is near?
last five chapters.....
what.....
i thought there would be more.....
of fuck....
shitt.....
welp....
there is duality....
LET'S FUCKING GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
I wonder when Frederick will make his prank screw everything I want to see how this will develop, and see how Frederick will get back at them, he is smart I imagine he will think of something
Waiting for it to all go horribly wrong...
More more more MOARRRRR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Damn was waiting for this chapter. Gonna love it if it all back fires on Luna and Fred pranks her and celly. Something along the lines of blowing Luna off for Stella. Just some dark humor on my end. I regret nothing as I love seeing people squirm. Keep it up great read.
Guess we're gonna need to pass out helmets for that prank.
6420933 No idea! Hahaha, enjoy the read!
Stella, best honor guard!
Oh no Fred, you're so fucked
Why do I foresee this ending in tears?
Easy with the pranks Luna, go to far and YOU will be the one sleeping on the couch, alone and very sex deprived for lord knows how long, males can do the "no sex" punishment as well.
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You say No Threesome, but with 3 Mares in on the Prank and Frederick, that isn't exactly 3
there will be lols to be had
Good chapter! Stella wearing that outfit in front of Fred, I think I know what's comming
Last 5?
Well, everything comes to an end eventually...
But it dosn't mean I like it
Sound off!
Excellent chapters, as always! This comment goes for Recruiting and for War, I missed the last update . Loved them both! No issues found, but I wasn't expecting any, not with your phenomenal work. You are, however, evil as evil can be, recruiting Stella like that. I simply adore that move! Can't wait to see what you bring up next.
Stella having kinky involvement in the Prank War? i didn't even know i needed this in my life till now
well Fredrick's boned
That was fun, may I have another? Looking forward to more.
Keep up the good work. Deus tecum.
6421343 What you did there... I see it
a new prank and I am betting this is going to be good.
Fred has the best problem coming up, I suspect. On one hand, he is going to be teased for at least a year by Stella for it, on the other, he still has his phone. So, blackmail as long as it exists.
Luna will walk in on Stella and Frederick in an almost (or actual) compromising situation and act like she's heartbroken he would cheat on her.
It will be glorious even if it's not that
Son of a biscut.
The first hints of setup and who's in the game.
Fred is so screwed.
It also leaves open just how he'll return fire when the time comes.
6421343 hmm me and you are similar
Fredrick, ya poor bastard, this is gonna be hilarious!
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He could be a Lucky Bastard depending on what happens
6425496 If its him and stella, I think she would destroy any chance of him walking for a while.
well thats kind of a bitch act on lunas part. he helped her with her prank now shes going to prank him for helping her.. id dump my girlfriend if she did that to me.
6425919 he did have sex with celestia. I know that she suggested it but are women simple like that? Nay homie nay.
And then they all fucked! Or not.
Missed a quotation mark at the end.
A parte questo, mi è piaciuto molto e non vedo l'ora che la guerra scherzo per iniziare. Heh heh heh!
AND FREDDIE TURNS IT ALL AROUND ABD GIVES ALL THREE OF THEM THE BEST FUCKING NIGHT EEEEVVVVVUUUUUURRRRRR!
Mane Medic out .
Pardon me while I laugh my ass off and proceed to cry immediately afterwards after being informed of there being five chapters remaining.
Dis gon b gud.
Five chapters left?
I would definitely love see Fredrick banging Stella
What do you mean "The last five chapters" Couldn't you have left me blissfully ignorant to the winding down of this wonderful fic! Anywho, keep it up this has been a blast to read.
6438497 That wouldn't be a bad thought.
6425919 Females in a nutshell
What a traitorous cunt. Both of them, actually.