Fredrick falls into Equestria and he is allowed to stay in the castle for his troubles. There, he meets and quickly befriends Princess Luna, and their quickly evolving relationship allows them to explore the 'benefits' of being close, best friends.
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DAMN, SON!!!!
Well that...that just happened...now all we need is cadance to show up with some advice, stella to show some jealousy, and Blueblood to fuck with everyone and we will be good.
6328914 Thank you for your input. It's mainly because it lacks a little bit of the 'meatiness' and actually getting into what was happening instead of glazing over it, but that was meant to be covered later because I decided on some weird system. Oh well, thank you anyway
Well damn, sonny. I wasn't at all expecting or even hoping for a good rutting with the Big White in this story, be it with Fred or someone else, but you delivered exactly that and BOY was it hot enough to melt stones!
I gotta say I'm also VERY glad that both Fred and Celly shot down a herd idea, and that Luna reserved herself to teasing Celestia to teach her boyfriend about her sweet spots and generally let her have her moment instead of trying to force a full threesome. I don't do lesbian or polyamory, and even in-universe it wouldn't make a whole lot of sense according to Luna's idea of "sating Celly's curiosity about Fred".
I'm gonna take an educated guess and say that now that any possible sexual tension is done and over with, things will get even more relaxed and friendly between these three. Looking forward to more vanilla hugs! (Hell, were I writing this, there'd be a hug every time they entered the office, since their relationship is so close - but hey, I'm a GIGANTIC cuddlebug, so what can I say?)
Though I also have a complaint: why are you offscreening most of the rutting between Fred and Luna? We only had one full session back in Twi's home, and after that, there was only half the fun of her blowjob during Celestia's dildo session. Don't short out on us now!
EDIT: Downvote all you want, kids. This isn't a shitpost, and so these points stand no matter the red number up there.
I skipped this.
No one posted about it yet so....
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6328939 Glad you enjoyed it!
And technically I only offscreened one alleged sex scene, as well as the HOURS BEYOND HOURS worth that they did at Twilights place... writing clop spanning ten thousand words, or even five thousand words of pure sex is incredibly difficult to keep interesting .
You would be right in your assumptions though in terms of tension, it's pretty much gone, and any sexual encounter will solely focus on Fredrick and Luna. Trust me, we ain't done yet. There's about seven parts left in the story so there's plenty to have.
6328948 Okay.
Neat
stayclassy
Freddie got fingered!
God dayum that was a hot scene
i dont think so. celly would want and need more just like any normal anything would after not getting any for soo long. fred already did it with her, and he, being her GOOD friend, could not possibly see her flustered so. i think an office fucking with celly and then luna walking in with a "shit eating grin" wouldnt be too far fetched at this point.
in general though it has been a good... very good read and up till this point no real conflicts. glad to see that one has happened and been resolved, though like you said the prank war thing should provide some ... interesting conflict.
6328956 That's not what I meant. Skipping out of round 2 and on, unless it gets even steamier and kinkier than the first, is okay. What I had a gripe with was on part XVI, for example, when all we had was this:
That's not enough, fella! Fred and Luna getting it on is still very much novel to the fic, pushing it to the side like that feels lazy.
Yeah, I'm also holding my breath for what'll come of the deal with Blueblood. There's still very much enough time for things to go to shit.
The scene was insanely hot. I wonder if Fred and Celestia hooked up due to this chapter or If it was a one time thing. Regardless, the interaction between Frederick and the two Princess was entertaining.
This story wants me dead
Story: 5
Sides: 0
Tension completely gone. Luna, you are brilliant.
Yeah I can see why she didn't have problems with it, different cultures and all. Almost every guy's dream, have the opportunity to do that and get away with it... And a promise of a potential eventual repeat performance. Maybe. Just maybe.
It's totally gonna happen again, isn't it?
But a great chapter overall, everything got cleared out, so there's at least one less thing to worry about.
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When have TIa " shenanigan" is around this pie will be there.
well dam if this is a first attempt I am hoping that the need for stress relief come around one or three more times.
this chapter all sex aside really good you put a lot of thought in to the discussion before hand and it really made the hole chapter flow really well.
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And that night in the sunken city of R'lyeh, Cthulhu had a most peculiar dream.
Well, this was certainly worth the wait, well done Flammenwerfer.
6330018 I'd say I didn't laugh at that, but I'm not about to make a liar out of myself.
I couldn't do that even if I wanted to. I would be paranoid about it. "Nope fuck this it's a trap." Isn't he a hypocrite for doing this? I know there is a difference between a polygamous relationship and a one time threesome but still feels in some ways the same. "I could never have sex with another person other than you......well maybe a threesome with you and your sister."
6330295 He never really said that, though. Likewise, you don't really have to love someone to have sex with them. Ultimately it comes down to the idea of a threesome that includes say, you, your girl, and someone else. Would that be doable? Certainly, but it may take convincing on many parts.
As I said, I took a few liberties here and there, this may not be wholly realistic... actually, most likely not.
damn, it would have been nice if they would have started a harm together
6330319 As long as there's mutual trust and a measure of physical attraction like there clearly is over here, I don't see why it would be unrealistic. The parties only have to be open-minded.
Wait, did they soundproof the room?
6330822 oh no
6330822
The next day, Fredrick received many unexpected high-fives and slaps on the back.
6330822 They were in Luna's room, where she and Fredrick have many of their rendezvous, if she doesn't have every wall, ceiling, floor, and piece of furniture in that room enchanted with soundproofing and/or anti-scrying wards by now she's a pretty shit-tier magic user for being one of three (or is it four in this one?) Alicorns in existence who are commonly regarded as deities due to the sheer amount of their arcane power.
I really liked how he made it PERFECTLY clear to Luna that there would be no "herding" whatsoever, if Celestia had "joined" them in a triangle relationship it just feels like all the private moments and the feelings Luna and Fredrick shared between the two of them would loose their meaning.
This chapter through such a huge curve ball at me that it went left and then hit me on the right.
And I loved it.
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That is maybe a little bit of a white lie.
Why is Luna looking at herself? I think you meant Celestia.
Luna is thinking with science, what are you thinking with Fred?
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Interesting, dickings help solidify friendships. Just what have Twilight and the girls been up to?
She either got fucked senseless or was replaced with a changeling. Or through some really weird turn of events, was fucked into being a changeling and soon will lay eggs.
This isn't Luna... it's CADANCE!
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Being turned into a sex toy, how terrible for Fred.
Halal in the streets, haram in the sheets.
reminds me of this , around 3 minutes in
Someone help me, my room got attacked by a spooky ghost!
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Why do i get the feeling that what happened will be used as prank fuel.
Sequel.
Excellent work, my good friend. The chapter is great and the sex was...
AWESOME!
I more than enjoyed it: I loved it.
6334239 Non-cannon side story?
I knew this was going to happen after the celestia private thing and im happy that this is not a harem and thatfred hold his beliefs strong which is not common ib this kind of srories
6336485 I think that the only reason it's so common in these types of stories is that humans, as individuals, adapt to their surroundings. Be it for survival purposes or cultural. For example, the movie Dances With Wolves, shows a civil war soldier going 'native' with the Native American tribe near him. Adaptation is human nature. So it would make sense for many of us to conform. Though that's just my opinion
Alrighty then.
Ok but what about the occasionally repeat of events? like Frederick helping Celestia with an itch or Luna wants to recompensed him for something he did or as a birthday present? Also if you need ideas on what to do on a threesome we could give you some, like fingering while eating the other pussy that way no one is left behind.
P.S: Still wishing that Frederic will be their partner 'force' in crime and not an objective or objective, the laughs can be double and be force to help them, maybe even test pranks could work just as well
This is gonna be difficult to explain, so let me put it into words I can understand: This was fucking perfect. Absolutely so. I literally still can not believe how well you wove these words and phrases into an incredible adventure of emotion and sex. You worded everything so damned well that I had to stop reading at several points during their conversation *pre-coitus* to calm myself down, it was so amazing. You've set a rather high bar for yourself Flammenwerfer; I look forward to what you cook up next!
Edit:
Listening to Bon Jovi's "Living On a Prayer" while reading this is HIGHLY recommended by yours truly. Just seems to fit.
6344934 I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter so much!
That was fun, may I have another? Looking forward to more.
Keep up the good work. Deus tecum.
6331403 Your avatar just completes your comment and raises it to a whole new level of perfect.
Yes. Simply YES!