Fredrick falls into Equestria and he is allowed to stay in the castle for his troubles. There, he meets and quickly befriends Princess Luna, and their quickly evolving relationship allows them to explore the 'benefits' of being close, best friends.
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Gosh darn tease! Seriously, cliff hangers like that are cruel.
5866987 They keep you interested and coming back for more though
I thought there was going to be a threesome... Wasn't really disappointed though.
Oh my.
well then
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stayclassy
Really enjoyed this chapter.
That was fun, may I have another? Looking forward to more.
Keep up the good work. Deus tecum.
*giggles insanely while waiting for the next chapter*
You sir, are too damn good at this.
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See you in the next chapter!
5867746 Kek, I do what I can
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See you next chapter
Awesome chapter! Can't wait for the next one.
Noice
Lucky son of a bitch...
So... You want to know what I think? They finally deserve a chance to not get enterupted.
Umm...luna gonna scream alots. If you know about mating with horse.
This story just keeps getting better with time. and I love the cliffhanger or should I say warning, I will have a cold shower on stand by.
Do I see Fredrick changing jobs or just adding a new positions to the one he has now?
Harts Fire
Well some one was in the mood
keep it coming and keep reading love it!!!!!
5867826 next chapter please and don't forget to keep me updated so I can continue to read more of the story when I get the chance
What if Luna gets pregnant?!?
5869511 Not happening.
First is genetics.
Second is that it is an absolute bitch to write a pregnancy.
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1. Precisely. I'll make this clearer later on but I like the interpretation of 'not compatible, but inherent genetic similarities and direct magical intervention can produce an offspring taking on the physical form of the mother' or something similar
2. This. All of my fucking THIS.
5867826 To quote, "It's Cool Guy!!"
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That's what magic is for mate.
that cliffhanger is evil
5871100 Hmmm... yeah I can see exactly where you're coming from. That's kind of the problem when you're excited and in a rush to just 'get the ball rolling.' The original plan was to include more detail-oriented scenes painting the initial and early days/weeks after his arrival as flashback scenes placed strategically throughout the story.
As for the showing vs. telling, yeah, I tend to be more direct but what is too much telling or showing versus showing and telling (and sometimes what EXACTLY constitutes to showing) is often subject to the individual reader. In my personal opinion, I'd prefer a story that got the point across versus one that just inundated you with 'showing' imagery, though both extremes are not preferable.
You gave it a go, which is all I can really ask for at this point. Each to their own
That cliffhanger. But a good lead-in, nice description what got Luna into that mood.
Nice job with words, Fredrick! It got her all nice and ready. You're gonna have more fun today than you had before!
That mathematicians have big, big... brains.
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It's about time; here we go!
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Wait...
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WHAT IS THIS?!
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Hm? Vas ist das? Der cliffhanger? Nein!
NEIN NEIN NEIN NEIN NEIN!!!!
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Excuse me
I need to call my girlfriend
5873402 Get some!!
Guy should consider himself lucky if he can limp around Ponyville the next day once Luna is done with him.
1!2!
Data scientists get all the honeys! I really enjoy this fic that fact Fred did his fictional undergrad in my field just made this better. Keep 'em chapter coming.
Does "lumina" know about the rather dull vehicle she has named herself after?
Always worth the wait ^^
Love this fic and looking foward to the next chapter
5873522 says thier will be a short wait till the next chapter. already a week has gone buy
*reads attentivley, reaches the chapters end*
HIMMEL HERRGOTT NOCHMAL!!!!!
*attempts to strangle her screen violently*
That little thing you pulled at the end there... it is befitting of the allmighty Gainax!
Bravo.
Also, I love how this story played out so far. I am very intrigued what Ol´Blue might be up to.
NOOOOO, the damn cliff hangers! WHY?? Also finally! Wait, you mentioned before about they getting caught...maybe by Twilight??
Great chapter like the others!
GODDAMMIT! I had my boner ready and everything!
you what would be great?
If Twilight quietly dispelled the soundproofing spell and listened in...
And enjoyed it...
maybe even joined in...
Crap. When trying to add this to the straight shipping group, I accidentally added it to the wrong section. I seem to be doing this a lot lately.
5960449 Join in? No, but dispelling the soundproofing and letting all of Ponyville hear those two go at it?Yep! Que awkward stares the next day, all day long from every citizen of Ponyville.
Fred and Luna should prank Celestia by having sex in her bed on a night where Celestia has a time consuming and stressful assignment she needs to complete. So when Celestia finally goes to bed, she won't be able to sleep.
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and if she uses the royal canterlot voice along with it not even sound-proofing will keep THAT quiet!
Thou will soil Twilight s brain with thou rutting how fare thee
I think the word hated would be a better fit here but I'm not 100% sure.
5897907 You break the fourth wall, I'll get the rope. We'll get them to do it yet.
And so do a whole lot of guys, 'cause you're not the only one.
Well that about sums him up.(groan)