A rhyme-structured tale told from a second-person perspective, you are a pony unlike any other who decides to visit a quiet hut, located in the middle of The Everfree Forest. With no valid reason being given, however, you grow fond of the individual you came to see but something shines out from the corner of your eye convinces you to delve into something deeper. It appears you have come here not just because of the kind zebra but also because of that one object entirely...
This story happens to be the very first fanfic that I have probably ever done. This fanfic is open for everyone to comment, to share and criticize. Let me know what you like/dislike about the story on my first attempt and perhaps I will get better, all thanks to you.
Chapters (1)
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thongthing bothered me. There is a new line for each sentence, not sure if that was done on purpose or not.4869057 the intention of leaving every new line for each sentence for me is to separate one line that ends with a leading word to another sentence with another leading word that rhymes with the former. Hence the structure of the story seems different then other stories, I assume. Glad you noticed!
This is a good start looking forward to the rest !
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Thank you for the comment! This is my first fanfic I've wrote and I was wishing to continue it if I have expanded my ideas far enough. It may be a long time before I get back to working on it again.