Heart Break has always been one of those Stallions, good looks, good family, minor talent, a true gentlecolt in every sense of the word. This image is ruined by his inability to do anything right when it comes to mares. Therapy, self help books, he has tried it all, and yet always seems to be left sore, and broken hearted, no matter who it might be he falls for. Will our hero find true love? Will he finally overcome his fate to be alone forever? Probably not, but lets see what hilarity happens anyway.
Chapters (1)
Really funny start to your story, I am looking forward to reading more ^^ If you need someone for proofreading, I can always give you a hand
Time to consult the checklist:
Bad title? Okay, not really, but I have to still deduct points for your username being the title.
Cover art of an OC? That's a check for sure.
Barely passed the 1k word limit? Big check on that one for sure.
Completely incomprehensible description? I'm pleasantly surprised with that one, so no check at all for that one.
Like/dislike ratio unfavorable? Surprisingly, no.
2.5 out of 5? I suppose it can't be that bad. I'll see if this is any good.
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I'm pleasantly surprised at this fic. It's not as bad as I thought it would be. Don't get me wrong, it's not amazing, but it's alright. A few grammar errors here and there, but nothing some editing won't fix. Story didn't go too far since the first chapter is so short, but compared to other fics, it went a fucking mile.
I enjoyed this fic. I'll keep an eye on it.