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Uncontested


"Oh, does everybody need to pay for their lowest choke? Wanna be a bigger man and indulge some hope."

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I don't know what happen? Everything was fine now, until... I don't know. Why did this had to happen and why now, but I know for certain that this is not some sort of dream or illusion. I just wish this did not happen... I just wish...

Join Twilight Sparkle as she tries to attempt to bring back her friends and the princess from the evil that roams in Canterlot Castle. Will she be able to save her friends on her own?
Follow our hero as she is thrown into a whole new adventure to places she has yet to see.
She will go to new areas in search of the new element bears that the prophecy has foretold about.
Watch as she undergoes to new dangers that will be life threatening, but she will not do this alone.

Author mentions;
This is my first story that I written and posted.This story takes place between season 2 and 3. So no Princess Twilight.
This story has been in my mind for a while so I just went ahead and made it.
Criticism is appreciated as well so don't hold back.
I hope you all enjoy this story and wish it to continue. So please 'Enjoy your stay!'

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 20 )

i really like it hope to read more soon

5337282 Thank you for liking it. :pinkiehappy:
It makes me happy to see that someone has indeed enjoyed my story.
So thank you.

It is a good story, Looking forward to see where it goes and how it develops with time. :pinkiesmile:
On the sidenote: Needs some grammar correction, but that's just a minor error that can me fixed

5337355 Thank you. I will go ahead and fix that in moments soon.
In my next chapter I will make sure that my grammatical errors are little to none. :pinkiesmile:

when can we expect the next chapter?

5402559 Sorry for the hold up. Been busy with school, but now that it is Christmas break.
I can finish the chapter. :pinkiesmile:

i know i commented on this chapter before and i am sorry to bug you i was just wondering if by any chance you know when you might post next chapter :fluttershysad: i understand that life can get in the way and i don't want to rash you or anything i just asking if you don't know that is okay and take your time on making a grate chapter

5515336 I know that I haven't posted like I should and I feel terrible for not posting one in a long time since the last one I posted which was on december.
I will post two chapters by the end of this month. I will need to stop slacking off since I have a bad habit of doing so and also to give myself extra time to post them. I am sorry for the long wait, but wait no more. I will satisfy your hunger for more chapters friend. :pinkiehappy:

5546710 its okay understand that life can make people get off track and take the time that you need to make a great chapter also thank you for letting me know:twilightsmile:

will you have chapter two up today?

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Comment posted by Undisputed deleted Sep 12th, 2016

Can I have the update pls???

STILL WAITING FOR THAT UPDATE

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