I smile, because no one else will.
Kaleidoscope Coral has been having strange dreams, or rather nightmares, that she can't explain. The town she lives in, Stableton, has had trouble for years, most notable, the disappearance of it's citizens. Could her dreams be the answer to their problems, or the root of this evil? One thing is certain: Stableton will need to call in outside help if they have any hope of everything returning to normal.
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Enjoying it so far, keep up the great work!
4833023 Thanks. I finally got stuff planned for Chap. 4, so it'll be out any day now.
4838329 yay I can't wait!
Woot new chapter! I was starting to worry. It felt a little forced but all in all it was great. Loved the bickering between silverlining and burnout.
Kali seemed a tad too accepting but that might just be how she is :D. Keep Going I cannot wait for more!
4926300 Thanks so much for the support. You're the type of person I was hoping to get feed back from.
Also, Kali is that kind of pony. She is extremely open, and believes that everypony is initially good inside. This will actually play a larger part way later in the story, believe it or not.
4926524 I plan on giving my thoughts for each new chapter. I really like this story and cannot wait to see the way it unfolds.
First off, great chapter! I would personally love to see the full conversation between silver and rainbow. It would add to the character development.
this chapter felt short for some reason, but that may have been just me.
I was kinda sad there was no Kali in this chapter since she is one of my favorites, but I will live.
4941114 Sorry it felt short, but it just felt like a good place to leave off. As for Kali, I'm glad you like her as a character, but for the time being, I'm going to be focusing on the disappearances, and Kali actually hasn't been affected by this. None of her family members have gone missing.
4941630 I didn't really mean the short comment as a bad thing. now that i look back on it, the reason i think it felt short is because it had really good flow.
Well I was going to mention something about the mirror but you answered my theory very soon after that gem part. Again i am loving how well this seems to flow and doesn't really get stuck on anything like some of the other stories that i have read.
Keep up the great work and looking forward to the next part!
I didn't find the ending super predictable and again you did a good job with the chapter. The part that stuck out to me the most was the scene between Willow and Kali when she helped him through the crowd. Keep up the good work!
First off I would like to say sorry for the delay reading :).
LOVED EVERYTHING ABOUT THIS CHAPTER! Keep up the great work! The first meeting of a great pair and silver met Kali for the first time :D
5242956 Glad you enjoyed it.
I was also wondering: what do you think of the new cover art?
5250800 love the new cover art!
Woot its been updated! Kinda worried about what will happen to the mane six and the estate but great to see this isnt dead!