You know what I hate authors who are just too damn lazy to use proper etiquette or get a proofreader or an editor to fix their story. Don't just cancel a story because you don't have time to edit it get an editor to do it for you i'm not saying could just ride it all half ass and everything do your best send the chapter to another tear after it's edited then post it you canceling this just because some people are giving you good advice and just trying to help out is just childish

Please excuse some of the minor errors in my previous comment I don't own a computer so I have been doing everything on my iPhone and using speak and text a lot and sometimes it puts the wrong words and I don't catch it before I post things

4823126 I want to let you know that I cancelled the story. But you cn read what I had already published.

Why is this canceled? But it was good while it lasted.