When the CMC decide to split up to go and find better ideas to get their cutie marks. They soon all return was something amazing. On the next day of school, Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon are shocked. What did they get? What was shocking? And what is their story?
Hmm... Pretty good start. Let's see where this goes :)
I suppose English isn't your main language.
And which is their story?
Honestly, just the description is filled with mistakes. I don't want to even think about how many are there in the story.
So, Apple Bloom is a artist, eh?
so proud
Are you still creating these stories or is it on standby mode?
4710931 I what to disagree
And what is their story? sounds way better than And which is their story? That doesn't even make sense. No offence, but it all depends on the author