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Blue Moon

When a small blue Alicorn colt shows up in a field with no memory,chaos ensues.Not to mention the fact he has a pounding headache and no memories,and Luna and Discord seem to be involved somehow,(or at least,Celestia thinks so).

Chapters (3)

Prologue · 29th Jun 2014 · 627 words
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What just happened here? · 29th Jun 2014 · 820 words
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A what? · 29th Jun 2014 · 698 words
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apprenticeofchaos

apprenticeofchaos #1 · Jun 29th, 2014 · 2 · · What just happened here? ·

Thanks,Jomintine!I'm new at this so i needed some pointers.Also,the cover is only temporary until I get time to draw one.And never fear,I make niether Marys nor Garys.Back to the drawing(editing?writing?) board!

megaspy14

megaspy14 #2 · Jun 29th, 2014 · 1 · · A what? ·

The story is a bit rush

apprenticeofchaos

apprenticeofchaos #3 · Jun 30th, 2014 · 1 · · A what? ·

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Thanks for the useful tips and something-like-edits.I figure I owe you and everybody else who reads this fic an explanation for my certainly-not-the-best writing skills : I'm only just about to start sophmore year,am my own editor/pre-reader,and this is the first non-assignment story that I have written in the history of ever.That's not an excuse for my piss-poor writing skills,its an explaination.And this is me promising to do better.

megaspy14