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Silver Phoenix


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Hello! I don't know my name but these three fillies (CMC) made one for me. So my name is now Silver Phoenix and my new friends are helping me remember who I am.

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Comment posted by kudzuhaiku deleted Jun 26th, 2014

Wow not even one like, there goes two years of my time.:moustache::facehoof::fluttercry:

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4603235 Yeah, that tends to happen to the poorly-written obvious self-insert wish-fulfillment stories on this site... well, most of them.

4603235 I'm sorry, but there is no way you spent two years on this crap.

4603235 Two years of your time for only one chapter? I highly doubt that. I wrote a 110,000 word story in a few months.

Anyway, an alicorn OC who happens to be a former human who lost his memory? This is a combination of the biggest no-nos in this fandom, so you can expect downvotes by many people here solely for that reason.

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I'm not a fast writer. Two years of notes when I have the time.:fluttercry:

4603326 Don't view it as wasted time. View it as time spent using your imagination and trying to improve. Doesn't matter what people think. If you had fun writing, and you made improvement, that's all that should matter.

4603235 Oh ho that is just tragic :rainbowlaugh:

<Outside of the Everfree Forest endtrans>

>endtrans

how
how do you misspell entrance

Also, it took you two fuckin' years two write this, er, thing? I just... wow.

I don't cry at seeing whales dying, but holy shit does this make me want to curl up in a ball and bawl my eyes out.

I liked your story and hey even I admit I prefer alicorn ocs.:raritystarry::yay:
Hey ever my profile is focused on an alicorn os :P

thx I made so many forms of the same chacter that I had to have my bff pick the one she liked the most
(needless to say it took 2 hours for her to pick one):facehoof:

4602986 Unless it was written specifically for the contest, that is against the rules. Besides, that would just be giving this thing an excuse that it doesn't deserve.

4606584 Experience, yes. Putting a story in a section that it doesn't belong in to cover up for a site-wide hated character style, no.

4622113 I read your review and hate to say I liked it.

I put human because of lost his memories

Even if I wanted to read this poorly written story, that would've spoiled it for me. :rainbowlaugh:

Don't put spoilers in the description.

I wrote a chapter this long in a month and it's been four years...

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