Twilight and Three of her friends find Discords Journal and are now reading it. what will discord do if he finds out and how long has discord owned this Journal
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Twilight and Three of her friends find Discords Journal and are now reading it. what will discord do if he finds out and how long has discord owned this Journal
If you fix this grammar, the story would be amazing. Reply to this comment after you fix the grammar, and I'll read this again, if it has much better grammar I'll probably drop you a like and a fav.
However, your formatting was perfect. You just need to fix capitalization issues and spaces after quotes and commas.