Entry 11:8/5/99
Dear Diary,
I lost my diary for a while, almost 2 years now. Anyways, I'm almost nine now and I just started 4th grade at Canterlot Elementary School. I still only have one friend, but I'm okay with that. My parents are worried about me though. They think I don't have good social skills and will probably be making me go out more often, even though my social skills are perfectly fine, I just enjoy the company of Tavi more than everyone else at school.
Tavi is doing perfectly fine with making more friends though. She is actually pretty popular at school. Me.. Not so much. Tavi is so much more shy, but really kind and cool. But me, I'm laid back and a nobody.
I really wish I had more friends, but no one ever talks to me at school. I don't like starting conversations with random people.
It's just too hard and awkward.
I better get going, I have school tomorrow.
Vinyl
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Vinyl is a vampire
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Yep
4690459 oh lol
4649580 IKR
Okay I think I see the problem here. Let me know if you want any help with it. I am pretty good a critiques, BUT I don't pull my punches, if you know what I mean. I won't be harsh or anything like that. The reason I am saying this is, I see immense potential in this story and that would be a shame to waste. Lemme know if you want some help.
5169221 Eh.. Dunno if im even gonna try with this one anymore.. I was my first fic so i know it has to just suck
5169283 So redo it. I am with mine. I thought of a much better premise, and storyline. You just need more detail really.
5169360 eh. A little kid plus detail... Wow.. She's only like 7, she isn't that smart
5169392 True enough.
5169423 Yep
5169807 I suppose it's for the best. Besides the amount of humor that would be used to write that level of detail from a child's perspective would drastically change the story.
5169827 Yeah. I'm not really gonna do anything with this most likely..