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Poor Engineer
Nice to see that Scorpan's getting involved
I also loved the fruit stripes bit with Zecora
I'm guessing it did the thing where it cut off random lines of text again?
5766254 No, I just forgot to finish some paragraphs. Derp on my part. Everything should good now. And if not, then... Iunno.
5766257 That was my second guess, as it seemed to widely spaced and inconsistent, but I didn't want to assume >.>
I love the internal conflict here. There isn't a perfect ending for everyone.
Well, I officially have no idea what's going to happen next. All I know is that when it eventually does happen, it'll be amazing.
Bring it on, kind sir.
I bet the TwiMedic part is going to be fucking incredible when it comes around. I know it's going to happen soon, they're the last transformation left.
Kinda sad when I see there's a new chapter and its only roughly 1.5k words long, but at least it's a slight update. Plus, Scorpan will be joining them.
I await your story.
Two paragraphs later:
5767279
Twilight's OCD and magic with Medic's madness?
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5763323
It's easy. Just use times 2 text size, bold, the reddish color option, and italics all at once for a line, like this. AlSo, It HeLpS tO cApItAlIzE eVeRy OtHeR lEtTeR.
I'd say see what her life is like and then do the whole 'pull her into the world and do the legal loophole' thing if it warrants it.
This chapter is as deep as it is small... but in a good way.
5767072 They didn't tell the others about it at first, but when they made up their mind to go with making the viewing portal, they decided to let the other mercs know about the visit to Sunset's world. I'll be showing that visit in Magic Lives.
5766172 Proved where?
5768433 I'm guessing he's thinking of game theories, but that's hardly proof, just some far fetched conclusions.
5768639 Oh. Game Theories. Yeah, I disregard them completely.
Wh..wha? A new chapter?
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5771227 That .gif is absurdly adorable. :D
5767279 5767400
You mean something vaguely like this picture?
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5772765
I understand that part. The implication (as I read it) was that he was doing something disgusting with the contents. Directly, I mean. The only thing I could come up with was that he was fucking it, which doesn't seem like it would work very well. If it was just fresh brewed, unused lubricant then her reaction would make no sense. I would be like gagging at the thought of touching an unused Band-Aid.
5773075
He pleasures himself inside the vats. Rainbow Dash, in this story, has in the past accidentally crashed into his 'personal use' vats before while he was actively pleasuring himself.
5773128
Ahh~. Gotcha. Thank you.
5766172
That is just a theory... A game theory!
Valve haven't say word about Pyro's gender, so anyone can have their personal headcanon about it. For me Pyro is agender (just for saying an example), but this is Knight's story and he can write Pyro the way he wants and no one can demand a change of Pyro's gender at this point of the fic so it fits their personal headcanon for Pyro. Also, his headcanon is not making Pyro act Out of Character so, at least for me, that is enough.
5772988
Santa Madre di Dio! yes!
I think for an interesting arc have the BLU's and their counterparts to face against the Nazis. I'd love to see how they would react. Maybe have them be sent to WW2 in Berlin or one of the concentration camps or go Wolfenstein and have them in an alternate timeline of the Nazis winning the war. I await at your reply.
Poor engineer.......
5780927 Why would she owe you a favor? Also, I've got my own Palutena and her army, so... Should be interesting...
5781361 Well... It's a funny story. I have a Message Box for that kind of thing so we don't upset the Author. Well?
5776512 As someone who loves Game Theory, I still enjoy seeing others' headcanons. Some of the theories are interesting, and I'd like to think have some truth to them, but others are just silly. Mario isn't a psychopath, he's just a sore loser. But Princess Rosalina might be Peach's daughter. But that's just what I like to believe. Pyro is whatever gender fits the story best. Here, that makes her female. In nerf NOW! That makes him male. In other stories Pyro might not have a gender. But that's just my canon. A head canon! Thanks so much for reading!
5883875
1.) Fluttershy's dream is reference to a CREEPY creepy fanfic called Pattycakes, where she does something similar to Rainbow Dash instead of Rarity. (Don't look for it. Seriously.)
2.) Meh. I like the idea.
3.) It's something I made up for the story.
Whatever you do, DO NOT name the EoMagic fusion Twidic. Or Spardic. or use the -dic part of medic at all.
>>KnightMysterio
is pattycakes really that bad?
5892072
Depends on your view. The vast majority I've heard from find it SO FUCKING CREEPY. I've read it. I wish I hadn't. It is SO FUCKING CREEPY. And not creepy scary like a creepypasta story, but creepy in a way that makes you feel dirty after reading it.
5914997 I believe it is a reference to Expiration Date. The Valve made SFM where they teleport bread with...consequences.
Entry 2? Where's Entry 1?
You know, Knight. Thanks to your fanfic, I've come to appreciate the horror genre, played Eversion, watched Puella Magi Madoka Magica, learned of Five Nights at Freddy's, discovered the Let's Player Markiplier (after finding out that PewDiePie, who I figured was a go-to for horror game Let's Plays, stopped playing the first game midway), and checked out the Pewds's Amnesia Let's Play.
Thank you for introducing me to the joys of the horror genre. Even though that doesn't sound right.
Wait, wait, wait! If the BLUs and the REDs are the same people, then does that mean that the BLUs are the real bodies?
Stay with me on this. If the Rainbow of Darkness was sent to get the Dark Bearers and there was two versions of them, one real, one fake, then wouldn't it go for the real ones?
There's a character in the show called the smooze now. So that's a thing.
Is this fix still a think or is the writer just having a break?
Because this is the first 250k+ word doc I have read from the start
Plzz say this is still a thing
6000584 You'd rather them all have PTSD from being zombies? You want the children screaming themselves awake every night, having dreamed dreams of their flesh rotting off their bones? No. What Luna did is perfectly in character for her, as far as I'm concerned. She is the guardian of dreams, and the show has shown her to be protective of children. Because Honesty isn't just about telling the truth all the time. It's about knowing when the truth will do nothing but cause harm.
6042492 Not sure, but I believe it is called Pattycakes.
6000897 Can you tell me which chapter the comment you are replying to came from? I can't tell and I want context.
6137311 A Blank Story part 2.
6151400 Giving it a chance is all I can really ask of you. Thank you for doing so.
The writing isn't at all subpar or even slightly off. If anything, some people just have too high standards. However, that isn't too say that I'm incapable of recognizing excellent writing when I see it. I have rifled through various fanfiction and came upon yours a year ago. Binged it, followed it and have been waiting patiently for an update. It's extremely hard to catch my interest, but only someone who has created something as well written as you had managed that (ADD right here). If you get negative feedback for something, then it should definitely be for something justifiable. If not, then they can just shove it.
i hope we get to see saxton hale in equestria fighting with them
Is there a reason why did you put the story in Hiatus? Is it something important so that it warrants it?
6215171 Please read my current blog entries.
6192814 ThAnK yOu VeRy MuCh.
I am happy to have chosen this story to read over the others. Amazing story with the right amount of everything to make it better. I am pleased to wait for the next chapter and even more excited to see, what I assume the final nightmare to be, Nightmare Celestia.
Thanks for the great story,
~OreoKookie
6259082
Very much true.
It's somewhat cute imagining Pyro and Engineer that way, though.
Hopefully the future of the ship doesn't go up in flames and come down in ashes.