Solly and Ditzy make for an odd enough pairing, I guess; stacked up against the arrival of Slendermane, however, they look positively normal.

I'm giggling like a little girl on top of a chocolate mountain. What kind of a black magic is this?

bravo!

I gotta say, this is the best TF2 crossover I've read. We require moar pony.

Also, you keep using things like person and hand instead of pony and hoof. Just minor things, really, but the story's fucking epic.

Slenderman

Let me clean up the rainbow vomit i just puked from reading this story, Seriously this is fucking epic. The battle scene was highly detailed and comepletly awesome, Tracking the hell out of this story!!

TF2 + Ponies + Slenderman = PURE WIN

I love you for making this story.

Ok lets see we have all the TF2 classes together, My little pony, AND Slenderman? .....Shit is about to get real up in this bitch!

First: Again, I fucking love this story (Why I'm back reading it again)

Second: I've noticed a slight mistake, when Engie is in Rarity's shop. "He noticed gemstones, including several ." There's a space, then a period, like a word was forgotten. (Forgive me for not finding the exact wording, my computer's in for repairs and all I have is a second generation iPod touch, and the chapter length makes it revolt, sometimes crashing the browser as it tries to load the entire chapter, when I scroll up and down)

Third: Might I suggest changing Spy's cutie mark? It just seems..... Well, unsuitable. Perhaps a pocketwatch, as a dead ringer reference, or a Sapper, or possibly a cigarette case or mask? I'm not sure why, it just rubs me the wrong way.

Fourth (And this is the important one): MOAR.

KICK. ASS!

Nice story. Found it on FanFiction.Net. Could you please add the 'tag' "Team Fortress 2"? I wasn't able to find it until I found one of your other fics called "Mothers", which I also found on FF.Net. I'll be watching.

Okay. Just to get things straight for other readers:

Heavy, Soldier, Demoman - Earth ponies
Medic, Engineer, Pyro - Unicorn ponies
Scout, Spy, Sniper - Pegasus ponies

Did I get it right?

Oh, and what's with the itches the Mane Six are having?

Love it. Just one thing is Pinkie pie's character might need a little more work but OtherwIse I have nothing to complain about. It's awsome

i must say THE PYRO IS A MALE!! (i have proof)

2nd :0 DAFUQ!?! what's with the itching thing...

Quickly take all of my likes, all of them damn it!

A Tf2 and MLP crossover. Never thought I'd live to see the day.

Man amazing story, unfortunately my printer exploded trying to print it all(148 pages) now i cant take it with me :(

I am currently working on something similar to this, only its with RED.Hope its passes moderation this time though.

TF2+MLP=

This is pretty great so far. Really looking forward to it. Although saying "people" instead of "ponies" irked me a bit... Still, I'm very glad I decided to start reading this.

I think the itches may come from having a mercenery protect you with the thought that said mercenery could turn on you without notice.

I might like to see how Big Macintosh reacts to meeting Heavy after all Heavy is taller than Big Mac by who knows how much.

DA! Curse my soft spot for TF2 crossovers.
I find it lolzy to see how each tf2 cross describes them in pony form.

45201 OMG I came across the whole "Slenderman conspiracy" and shit the other day, and when I say "Slender pony" I was like "Holy fuck, that explains the black liquids and stuff " Funny how it's tying in right now XD

I'll be honest i'm not impressed. I'd go into why but im too tired to think. Maybe later.

This is one chapter? Holy crap, this is awesome.

Okay, so everyone sees Slendermane, but am I the only one who saw what one could interpret as Homestuck references? If not the alternating letters, than at least the indigo drink that makes one STRONG.

OH GOD YES PYRO!

EVERY OTHER SENTENCE IN THIS CHAPTER INJECTS ME WITH A FULL DOSE OF AWESOME.

Prepare thyself for the liking ceremony!

Heavy is best pony.

Slender Fortress 2

1093989 Yo Bio, Wazzup?

I'm liking this new pyro.

This... is truely amazing.
I have no other fitting words to describe it.

For some reason, this chapter is rough to read. Events escalate really quickly, but the real problem is that I keep forgetting what the ponified team members look like. Perhaps you could take a breath between each team mate's descriptions? They would be easier to read and remember if extended into brief two-or-three-sentence paragraphs.

Soldier nodded, picking up his shoulder.

I think you mean shovel.

Hai dere Slendermane!

Holy hell man, you're good at this

1. TF2
2. Slendy
3. Pyro's personality (And gender, SHE'S A GIRL I TELL YOU!!)
4. I smell ROMANCE

Reasons I like. YOU ARE CREDIT TO TEAM!

You got a free internet and all my from the EPIC crate.

yay, fun with fire!

I planned on only reading part of this chapter... like that was ever going to happen!

why slendermane!?

I can almost see the engineer sitting on a box with his guitar, singing ring of fire while pyro sit opposite, staring at him with a crazed grin on her face, and a literal ring or fire surrounding them.

Should i be worried that i found the Pyro kinda cute when she started that little fire?
I wouldn't worry about it to much Sin.
Wait... if i remember correctly, Sandvich has baloney in it...
And?
Ponies are herbivores. He cant eat Sandvich.
._. ...Run.

Slendermane and PF2.
(Takes off sunglasses)
Mother of God...

Best. Thing. Ever.
TF2 mercs in Equestria
Awesome plot too

and also........fucking slenderman dude

Usually the typical pairing is:
Fluttershy-Medic
Engineer-Applejack
Scout-RD
Sniper-Twilight
Spy-Rarity
Pinkie Pyro
Heavy-OC
Demoman-Ditzy Doo
Soldier-Spike

Why is it that Ditzy is always involved in every TF2 crossover?

Heavy snorted, rearing up and bringing his hoof down, crushing the creature's head. It exploded like a wet sack, splattering in a mass of black goop, startling the Equestria natives. "Then we will crush tiny baby monsters, and protect little ponies!" he rumbled.

This started to play in my mind :

Tracking the ST out of this!

PYRO IS ADORABLE