Hey there, the name's Rainbow Sky. I love MLP. Check out my stories, you won't be disapointed!
Scootaloo is eager to find out who her real parents are, and with the help of Twilight, there is a great discovery. Now Scoots joins a certain group of ponies, despite Rainbow's countless attempts to bring her back. Will she fail, or will she succeed? Read to find out!
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This has potential!
It's quite verbose in how it's mostly dialogue - I would add spacing in between paragraphs.
It also might not hurt to add some details such as character reactions or things of that nature. Thought processes.
It's an interesting idea, just needs a bit of work.
Also, welcome to fimfiction!
Not bad may fav this at one point
Bravo! I love it!
is that how the book ends though
? Poor scootaloo
I love it when people like pendrake and HMXT write my thoughts for me . This has a ways to go to bridge the gap between idea and story, but keep working on it.
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It doesn't end there, as it has quite a few more chapters in the making. I am glad you liked it!
4574413 No problem
!
4576212 Shuddup and quit being a troll
4581002
Thank you for standing up for me. I deleted both of those coments because they were long, and I don't really like critics. Mind if we be friends?
4585781 Not at all
I've had the same experience when I was starting 2 write
No one stood up 4 me back then but that doesn't mean I cant stand up 4 AWESOME writers like u
4585991
Aww, I'm glad you think I am awesome!
Hmm your chapters seem to be getting shorter each time, also it seems Scootaloo paid for her milkshake twice this chapter
4590039
I fixed it. Thank you for telling me.
4590327 my pleasure, and i know how hard it can be to write chapters to certain lengths.
MY GOD RAINBOW SKY
Ur hard 2 lov2
But ur even harder 2 hate
4596181 Uhh, Thank you? Sorry, I really don't get it.
4598157 uh..it's a way of saying that I don't think its possible 4 someone 2 hate u
4598164 Well then, thank you again!
Okay man where is chaptee 4
? I'm killin' myself here
!
I demand the next chapter
4668775
It will come as soon as I get the time to write it.
4672523 Good
it better
4672523 so are you supposed to be Rainbow Dash's cousin or something
?
4672954
Sorry, I don't roleplay. Just made a funny username, that's all.
4673115 right
I AM TWILIFHT SPARKER
WHERE ARE ME FIREWORKS!